Raidoku

I plan for it to be male possibly pirate. My friend made a suggestion of either a pirate griffon, or a pirate diamond dog

not sure if i ut this in the right topic..if not someone please tell! ^^; anyway. I need some help making a good oc, because lately..well my oc's..don't do it for me. they're all so..eeeh. Now, i need help with race and other stuff. Like job and stuff (I'm tempted to make maybe pirate.) but my deal is choosing a race as well, as I..don't wanna use a pegasi (Tad overused for me) hell, i'd be fine with having an Alicorn oc (I'm good with making bad traits to even it out. though i'd rather not..cause Alicorn...) but, i need a LOT of help making an oc, because..i have no creativity except for a few things..So, can someone give me some help? if i get the help i need, i can make the oc! thanks! if you need more info. feel free to ask

That picture looks a f***ing giraffe..XD

I decided to pop in a new coloring to make him less brown (Since i have to many of those)

it did indeed help me out :3 also, how do you feel about the colour scheme? Iv'e been trying multiple schemes, from yellow and green to browns to reds and such

Hey there, today i need..well, some assistance. I just made a photographer oc and i need helping in a backstory. Now i do not have the pony version of him (my friend is a anthro artist. but i did the linearting and stuff, anyway) but i do need some help with the backstory His name is Kaisaurus. and if you notice the pose. it is the same one of Frank west (Character from dead rising) :3

That is so freaking adorable! >W<

Thank you I appreciate you telling me how you feel about him :3

I have already wrote a lot for my oc, but can you review his story? If i made him mary sue ish, or gary sue. I wanna change it his story: Name: Raidoku Name Pun: Raion (Lion) and Doku (Poison) Race: Manticore Story: Raidoku is a much smaller manticore male, having no giant boofy mane, he looked more of a normal person. Just more manticore like. As to not poison people with his scorpion tail, he uses a covering to stop his poison from hurting anyone. Although he has nothing wrong with harming someone, but if he has just no reason to, then he'd just be a dick. Raidoku is a normal young teen, living life as any would do, although he was skilled at some fighting, he could easily run and climb thanks to his wings, although because of his manticore genes, he was rather strenghty. using his strong sharp claws to pierce through fur and skin. As a baby, his mother and father kept him safe, deep in a dense forest. although he didn't grow much, being the same size as a regular stallion, thanks to more genes from his mother. as he grew, he learnt from his father, who was rather..well, tame, unlike many wild manticores, he learnt how to fight, how to live, and eventually he went off on his own to explore. many years pass, untill he is 17 years old. Where he is now, a normal male, who hides his scorpion tail. Age: 17 Personality: Rai is a bit of a hot head, although he is somewhat ditzy at times. He can be smart, having had a good education. it just sometimes..doesnt show, although he has a good heart, but he does think somewhat darkly sometimes "I.E. thinking of eating someone he hates." although he wont do it..maybe. although with his nice deemener, he can be quick to be friends with, he is a brave person, fit to be a guard, if he was a pony of course. since equestria is effin' racist. although he may hate himself for what he is, but he also loves it. being a man that is normal.

Normally he'd be a batpony if as a pony, but thank you very much I like it eitherway, sir/ma'am! *huggies* you did a very nice job. also, would you be mad if i made a new line art of this (not just straight trace) and fx a few problems? i love what you did, but my ocd acts up