My OC WiP

[Doz2nd 294]

So I started with my OC, I'd love some "constructive" critique .

 

Mostly I'm worried about the scale.

 

 

I know the wheels are supposed to be round, but i don't care  -_-

Edited June 12, 2014 by Doz2nd

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Yay! Another street racer pony! Awesome art. Maybe you can join with him into one of my racing RPs once you've got the backstory and all that finished!

[Marciblook 612]

Ponies look weird on bikes....that's all I got

[Doz2nd 294]

Yay! Another street racer pony! Awesome art. Maybe you can join with him into one of my racing RPs once you've got the backstory and all that finished!

 

That sounds fun, though I've not yet started on the backstory.

 

Maybe I could copy my own... hmmm...

[child of the night 271]

@@Doz2nd, 

 

hmm, constructive criticism... I am gonna do bullet points.

• there is no tail
• the legs and hooves are oddly shaped
• the helmet is improperly placed on the head and should be slightly lowered
• lacking a cutie mark (may not have one so this may be inaccurate)
• if this is a normal pony then the eyes are a bit too bulky

Just trying to be constructive, don't kill me...

Edited June 12, 2014 by child of the night

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@Doz2nd,

 

Yeah, it'd be a good idea if you make one yourself.  

[True Rarity 1,240]

I think this looks epic. The hooves are kind of flimsy and skinny and the eyes look a bit awkward, but other than that, excellent work.

[Doz2nd 294]

@@Doz2nd, 

 

hmm, constructive criticism... I am gonna do bullet points.

• there is no tail
• the legs and hooves are oddly shaped
• the helmet is improperly placed on the head and should be slightly lowered
• lacking a cutie mark (may not have one so this may be inaccurate)
• if this is a normal pony then the eyes are a bit too bulky

Just trying to be constructive, don't kill me...

 

Nice summary /)

 

1# TOTALLY FORGOT THE TAIL !

2# There will be gloves and boots that's why i just made them quickly

 

3# It's an Open helmet not a regular one " http://www.championmotouk.com/avactis-images/u/HJC/Alt_HJC_IS-Multi_Classic_Open_Face.jpg "

 

4# Haven't figured out what the cutie mark should be yet, will have a decal of it on the tank later.

 

5# Went for Chrysalis type eyes, not sure if they are correct (in that matter)

[child of the night 271]

 

 

It's an Open helmet not a regular one

 

Still, based on the eyes and what the head should be shaped like the helmet is a bit too high on the head 

[Doz2nd 294]

I think I lost the pony somewhere along the way. I have no Idea what I just draw. It's awsome though

[SailorMedamonGirl1 127]

Your OC looks awesome...In fact, you sparked my creative meter and now I wanna make a Biker Pony.

 

So far, it looks good to me. 

[Doz2nd 294]

Your OC looks awesome...In fact, you sparked my creative meter and now I wanna make a Biker Pony.

 

So far, it looks good to me. 

 

Thank you kindly.

 

Looking forward to see yours when it's done