dark Idea for a fanfic intro

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Even though I'm not really capable of making a full story, I'm alright at brainstorming random scenes. If I actually made a fully fledged fic, this is what the intro would be like.

 

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It is another late night in Canterlot. Princess Celestia is on the verge of going to sleep in her chamber. A black fog then suddenly veers through Celestia's room into her chamber.

 

Celestia turns around and sees a black ghastly figure, shaped like a giant ink blot. It also has big glowing bright red eyes the size of oranges. At the sight of Celestia, the figure narrows its eyes giving her a death glare, as if it wants to do something very deadly to her.

 

It tells her with a purely evil sounding voice, "Yooooouuuu..."

 

"What's the meaning of this!?" Yells Celestia.

 

The figure then pulls out its clawed hand, then pulls Celestia towards him with its powers. Celestia can then feel her neck starting to crack, as the figure is using its powers to choke her.

 

"You shall pay for your crimes against me and my people!" says the black figure.

 

Then suddenly, the figure breaks Celestia's neck, who now falls flat on the floor. The figure then looks down at Celestia's now lifeless eyes. "My revenge is now complete."

 

A moment later the figure hears a loud knock on Celestia's door. The figure then vanishes through her window. The guards break in and discover Celestia's corpse.

Edited June 29, 2014 by vgmaster9

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Well...that was..depressing...