Logo Feedback

[BronyPonyProductions 30]

Hello

 

I have to make a logo for a transportation company and if they like my idea's, they want me to make their site as well.

 

I was wondering if I could get some feedback on what I have so far?

 

First one is with illustration (being the little truck)

Second is just a simple color mix

 

They wanna use the colors black and yellow mostly. The company name is ACRONOS and freight SRL is a subtitle that I may use if I want to use it in the logo.

 

Any constructive feedback is appreciated or maybe some suggestions?

 

Thanks in advance

Edited July 13, 2014 by BronyPonyProductions

[Pinklady 346]

By putting one word in two different colours I get the impression 'acr' and 'onos' are two different entities. 

Is there a particular reason you do that?
If not, then it is very confusing. Especially because those two 'words' aren't words at all.

 

I don't want to take your logo down, it's just a honest remark, and I think many people will find that very confusing

Edited July 13, 2014 by Pinklady

[BronyPonyProductions 30]

By putting one word in two different colours I get the impression 'acr' and 'onos' are two different entities. 

Is there a particular reason you do that?

If not, then it is very confusing. Especially because those two 'words' aren't words at all.

 

I don't want to take your logo down, it's just a honest remark, and I think many people will find that very confusing

 

Hmm, so maybe try it only in yellow? I could give that a try.

And don't feel bad, thinking you are taking it down or something, I did put it up for honest feedback

BTW, thanks for your honest feedback

[Pinklady 346]

I do like the colours, it's a nice shade of yellow.
It needs some adjustments but it is certainly not bad