Fluttershy's Repressed Thoughts (Creepy Flutershy)

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Hello! How's it going? So today I wanted to look for the worst aspects of Fluttershy's personality and transform it into a demon like monster thing. This thing I drew still is Fluttershy, it's just a manifestation of here repressed and ignored thoughts.

 

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Well, it does not look like either a demon or creepy, I will have to tell you that. I really cannot tell you how to improve, maybe color it?