My Little Pony Fan Fictions in script format.

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(May be in the wrong section)

 

Have any of you considered writing a fan fiction in script format? It may be good for those who tend to write a lot of dialogue in their fan fictions. I will write fan fictions in both story format and script format depending on the fan fiction. It is hard to find a website where you can post them, though. 

 

It's not the best, but here is one of my scripted fan fictions that I mentioned before. It is not the proper length for an episode, though. 

 

Scene: Twilight’s home.

 

Characters present: Twilight, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Spike.

 

Twilight: Do you know what the importance of today is?

 

Rainbow Dash: Not really…

 

Twilight: Today is the celebration of harmony. It is traditional for a member of each race to be selected to represent harmony. Princess Celestia believes that there are no better ponies than the wielders of the elements of harmony to be the ponies to represent it. Any questions?

 

Rainbow Dash: Aren’t you better with magic than Rarity is?

 

Twilight: I’m not a unicorn anymore, so I can’t represent them.

 

Rainbow Dash: Oh. Right.

 

Spike: Aren’t you going to tell them the procedure?

 

Twilight: I was about to get to that! When we are finished here, we will be going to Canterlot. You will see a set of seven chairs. There will be four chairs in the back, that is for the Alicorns, and there will be three in front. Applejack, you will sit in the left chair. Rainbow Dash, you will sit in the middle chair. Rarity, you will sit in the right chair. That is when you face the chairs, not when you are sitting in them, in case you’re wondering.

 

Rainbow Dash: At least we don’t have to worry about Rarity being in the wrong chair!

 

Rainbow Dash and Applejack laugh

 

Twilight: (rolls eyes) Anyways… remember, this is not a contest to see which race is better. This is to show Equestria and ponies can, and should, live in harmony regardless of their race.

 

Rarity: Do not worry, Twilight. You can be certain that there will not be any conflicts among us.

 

Applejack: Ya can count on us!

 

Rainbow Dash: Let’s do this!

 

(Theme Song)

 

Setting: Canterlot Castle courtyard

Characters present: Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Spike.

Twilight: Ponies will be arriving in a few hours. That should give us enough time to prepare and relax before the ceremony. All three of you will talk about how your race is important for maintaining the balance of Equestria.

 

Twilight and Spike go into the castle

 

Rainbow Dash: This is going to be so easy! Without the pegasi, there will be no rain for food to grow. Ponies need food to survive.

 

Applejack: Without the earth ponies, who’ll grow the food?

 

Rarity: Without the unicorns, the… um…

 

Rainbow Dash: Rarity, are you OK?

 

Rarity: I’m supposed to tell a crowd of ponies how unicorns are important, but I don’t know what my race contributes to Equestria.

 

Applejack: I’m sure there’s somethin’, Rares.

 

Rarity: A long time ago, the unicorns brought forth day and night, but Princess Celestia and Princess Luna do that now. Today, what purpose do unicorns serve?

 

Rainbow Dash: I don’t know much about unicorns, but I know unicorns are equally as important as pegasi and earth ponies.

 

Applejack: I’m with RD.

 

Rarity: I’m going to go inside.

 

Rarity walks inside the castle.

 

Scene: Canterlot Castle main room

Characters: Twilight, Rarity, Spike

 

Twilight: Hey, Rarity. Is everything going alright?

 

Rarity: Yes… for Applejack and Rainbow Dash…

 

Twilight: What’s wrong?

 

Rarity: Do unicorns even have a purpose?

 

Twilight: Rarity, every species has a purpose.

 

Rarity: Pegasi control the weather, earth ponies grow the food, and unicorns don’t do anything. Sure, we raised the sun and moon a long time ago, but today, we have no purpose.

 

Twilight: I wish I could help, but I don’t know how.

 

Rarity: I’m going to go for a walk around Canterlot. The ceremony won’t began for quite some time, and I don’t have anything to say anyways.

 

Twilight: Rarity, we need you.

 

Rarity: I will be back in two hours.

 

Rarity exists. Spike follows.

 

Scene: Canterlot streets

Characters present: Rarity, Spike

 

Spike: I’m coming with you.

 

Rarity: What about Twilight?

 

Spike: She’ll be fine.

 

Rarity: Hmm.. OK.

 

Time lapse (Rarity/Spike song here): Rarity and Spike are still walking

 

Rarity: The buildings on this particular street are the oldest standing buildings in Canterlot. They were created five years after the first castle was created. The Canterlot castle was destroyed and rebuilt six times. The buildings here were originally used as houses, but today, they are historical landmarks. Some of the doors have one horse shoe while others have two. That is because, a long time ago, it was customary to hang one horse shoe on your door if you were single and two if you were married. The color of the horseshoe represents the offspring. White means they have no children, blue means they have one…

 

Spike: You are starting to sound like Twilight! Is this a unicorn thing?

 

Rarity: Every race is smart, Spike.

 

Spike: Not every race will teach other ponies about Equestria history… or math.. or science… or everything!

 

Rarity: I guess unicorns like to teach. I don’t see it as a problem.

 

Spike: It’s not a problem. I’m just not interested.

 

Rarity: I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to get carried away.

 

Spike: (gasps) Rarity! I think I know how unicorns are useful!

 

Rarity: What do you mean?

 

Spike: Unicorns are very intelligent and like to teach others of their intelligence. Sure, the pegasi and earth ponies are useful for survival of the ponies, but the unicorns are useful for the survival of Equestria! Without education, Equestria would not be the way it is today.

 

Rarity: So you’re saying unicorns are teachers?

 

Spike: Exactly!

 

Rarity: That doesn’t explain why there are teachers who aren’t unicorns.

 

Spike: Some farmers are pegasi, and you controlled the weather once.

 

Rarity: Fair point.

 

Spike: So, should we go back to the castle?

 

Rarity nods.

 

Scene: Canterlot Castle Courtyard.

Ponies present: Twilight Sparkle, Princess Luna, Princess Celestia, Princess Cadence, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, large crowd of background ponies.

 

Princess Celestia: Today is a celebration of harmony among earth ponies, pegasi, and unicorns! Without any further ado, each pony here will explain how their race keeps the balance in Equestria Maintained! Applejack.

 

Applejack: Well, howdy! Earth ponies were responsible for growing’ the food for the other ponies to eat. Without us earth ponies, y’all be starvin’.

 

Applejack chuckles, and crowd laughs

 

Rainbow Dash: Hey. Earth ponies may take care of the land, but without the pegasi, there won’t be any water. Everyone knows that we can’t survive without water.

 

Crowd murmurs in agreement

 

Rarity: The earth ponies and pegasi are very important for survival as a species, but the unicorns are important for the survival as a nation. Without education, Equestria will fall..

 

Bon Bon: If unicorns are supposed to educate us, then why are some teachers not unicorns?

 

Spike: (stands up and clenches his fist) Sure, not all teachers are unicorns, but not all farmers are earth ponies, and not all… (crowd yells loudly, Spike stops)

 

Twilight: This wasn’t meant to happen.

 

Princess Luna: ENOUGH!

Crowd quiets down.

 

Rarity: (To Princess Luna) Allow me. (Princess Luna nods in approval, and Rarity looks at the crowd) Equestria maintains the balance of harmony, not because of what we do as each race, but what we do as a whole. The earth ponies and pegasi work together on the growing of the food, the earth ponies and unicorns work together on the construction of buildings, the pegasi and unicorns work together on defending Equestria, and every race work together balancing harmony.

 

Ponies in talk quietly among themselves and whisper

 

Scene change

 

Scene: inside Canterlot Castle

Characters present: Twilight, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Spike, Princess Celestia.

 

Princess Celestia: Rarity, you were the first representing pony to truly understand harmony. It is not ponies doing something alone to help a community. It is ponies working together to help a community.

 

Twilight: I knew you were intelligent, but I didn’t expect you to do that!

 

Rarity: Spike is the one who deserves the praise.

 

Spike: I didn’t tell you how ponies work together. I just told you how unicorns are educated.

 

Rarity: Without you, I wouldn’t have been able to say anything.

 

Spike: Except maybe the history of Equestria.

 

Everyone present laughs

 

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If you wanted to do that there would no doubt be people like me who would be irked by the incorrect formatting. But otherwise it's a neat idea.

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Not too bad---kind of short and simple, but it had about the same overall plot a real episode of the show might have, where the characters learn a lesson about the subtleties of their place in the world and each other.

 

Not to dis your story, but TBH, I think story-format does a better job drawing the audience into the world of the story than script-format.

 

Also---I'm kind of a sucker for worldbuilding, so I'll say that it's in my headcanon that unicorn magic has a passive effect on the natural magic in the world of Equestria, calming it down and making it more orderly and suitable for pony habitation.  Also, earth ponies would make good guards as well as (though in a different way from) unicorns and pegasi, since it's canon that earth ponies have mega-strength.

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Not too bad---kind of short and simple, but it had about the same overall plot a real episode of the show might have, where the characters learn a lesson about the subtleties of their place in the world and each other.

 

Not to dis your story, but TBH, I think story-format does a better job drawing the audience into the world of the story than script-format.

 

Also---I'm kind of a sucker for worldbuilding, so I'll say that it's in my headcanon that unicorn magic has a passive effect on the natural magic in the world of Equestria, calming it down and making it more orderly and suitable for pony habitation.  Also, earth ponies would make good guards as well as (though in a different way from) unicorns and pegasi, since it's canon that earth ponies have mega-strength.

I sometimes prefer script format when the story I write seems to have a lot of dialog anyway. I am terrible with descriptive stuff, but I'm getting better.