Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "I never had problems with my parents. They always cared for me." Rising start eating another haysandwich. "And I don't mind, how you eat, so long you not mess around in the kitchen. Eat as fast as you want." Another bite. Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ....... delicious. No wonder, from me Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, "On the whole, however, I was a good kid who got on well with my parents," said Riley, not wanting to seem like some sort of rebel. "But still, since you're letting me do this..." Riley took another sandwich, tossed it up into the air, caught it in his mouth, chewed it up, and swallowed. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 Rising started to laugh, after he saw this. "How in Equestria can somepony eat like that? The only pony I saw eating like that before, was Pinkie Pie. Seriously, she is bottomless." Rising takes the next haysandwich and try to it like he did. It however end up in coughing. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, "I know, right?" agreed Riley, through his mouthful of sandwich before he swallowed it. "From all the junk I've seen her eat, she really must be bottomless." He got up and turned around to show his plump rear end, with his head still facing towards Rising. "I'm not, though," he said with a grin. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "That really was not necessary, Riley." He tries to get that pic out of his head, putting the rest haysandwiches again. "I lost my hunger for now. Want to get started on the story now? Or anything else in mind? I'm open, I have time." He puts his rest haysandwiches away for later. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, "Sure, let's get started on it," agreed Riley. "Okay, bud, I'm sorry, it was just supposed to be a 'cheeky' little prank." He had an idea. "This mare you like from afar, whoever she is..." said Riley. "If you can't get the image out of your head, perhaps you could imagine that it's the mare's plot instead?" he suggested. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "What?!" He was surprised about this idea. He start to blush, when he tought about Dash's plot. "I-I-I'm sure, I can t-try that for the story, i-if it h-h-helps ..." He feels more blushing. "We better get started then. Come on, take a chair." He sits down on his table, pointing next to him, to sit down there. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, "Very well," said Riley, sitting down on the chair. He thought for a bit. "How about we write something related to the magic stuff we did yesterday?" suggested Riley. "Shrinking, or inflation? Oh, I have an idea!" "A unicorn pony is running from the police, so he inflates himself and ties a string to his bellybutton to disguise himself as a balloon. His disguse works, but then a filly comes and takes him." OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "Actually, that sure sounds interesting. I write that down." Rising takes a quill with his right wing and start writing something down on the paper. It took him few minutes, before he finished with it. "Alright, I got that down on the paper now. More ideas?" Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 (edited) @, Riley thought for a bit. "A mare finds herself constantly having to swat flies in her house, so eventually, she goes outside into the garden, hunts down all the flies, and kills them all, while taking pleasure in doing so. The next day, she inexplicably finds herself shrunken down to the size of a fly." Edited October 4, 2014 by Rainbow Eclipse OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "Irony. Good point and idea! I will right get to it!" He takes a new paper out and start writing down the idea. After around 10 minutes, he finished the last sentences. "Alright, it's done. More?" Rising start to think himself for a little story idea. With the ideas, he have an idea. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, Riley continued to brainstorm. "A young colt is out at night and he comes across a statue. He touches the statue's hoof with his own, and he transforms into a statue, while the statue transforms into a real pony. The narrative would shift between the colt trapped as a statue, and the statue experiencing life as a real pony." OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "That poor colt. But it's a good idea. I write it down." Again a new paper, he write the next short story on a paper. Around 15 minutes later, he is done. "Those are good, but just small stories. How about, we making a book, with different stories? No main story, just many little ones. We have then 3 already." Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 Riley thought about Rising's suggestion and decided that it was a good one. "Yeah, let's do that. Those ideas I pitched would be better as short stories, after all." He continued thinking. Many of his ideas were about some sort of physical transformation. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "No matter how silly the idea is, spit it out. We need no perfect story now, just many good little ones. How a bout a little romance between 2 pegasi-ponies?" He suddenly tought about Rainbow Dash, sitting on the beach, leaning and smiling on him. "Yeah, I take this idea for sure." Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, Riley continued thinking. "I know! A earth pony mare falls in love with a pegasus stallion who lives high up in the clouds, so she makes a deal with Discord, who transforms her into a pegasus so that she can be with her love. She has to kiss him in three days." "Wait a minute..." He remembered the classic Walt Disneigh film, The Little Merpony. "NOOO!" OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "Sorry, already taken, I guess." He laughs, writing down his own idea, but changing "Rising Shine" into "Rising Star" and "Rainbow Dash" into "Raincloud Bash". Better not write our names there, if she or her friends would see that ... better not thinking about that. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, Riley thought some more. He then excitedly scribbled down an idea. A romance story between two ponies. Bliley Rythe and Elena Alderberry. Okay, Riley, you might want to make at least attempt to pretend that these characters aren't you and your dream mare. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "I have another one." H e write down a little story between 2 friends, having a little adventure in the Everfree Forest. It took him 6 minutes to write it down. "Done. Let's think about some few more ideas." Rising toughts more about an idea. He needs a while, to think about something. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, Riley took the note-filled piece of paper and looked at Rising's idea. "You know, we can probably get a whole bunch of inspiration for this idea if we actually venture into the Everfree Forest," he put forward. "We're both Pegasi, so we can fly out quickly in an emergency." OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "Better not ..." He is not exactly a pony with courage ... more the "Danger? Bye-bye"-pony. No adventures, just stay in home ... "Better not ... I'm to scared to go in there. About, what I heared what things living in there ..." He shivers nervously. He stands up, walks to the kitchen and drink some apple juice to calm down. Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, Riley frowned. "Aw, come on, it would be fun!" he said. "Like I said, we can retreat quickly if we need to. And it would enable us to write a story that feels like you're actually part of the action." "What will it take to convince you?" he asked hopefully yet doubtfully. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 Rising frowns. "I'm really not sure, Riley. Sure, the story would probably better, but I guess, after a day in there, I would have to much of a trauma to even write a word anymore. I don't like the idea ..." He feels sad, to deny an idea, but going in there is too much for him. He is too scared to go in there ... Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 October 4, 2014 Author Share October 4, 2014 @, Riley was still determined, and came up with a compromise. "How about we spend a day just on the very outskirts of the forest, right near the entrance slash exit, and if you feel confident enough, we can venture further into the forest the next day? Like that idea?" OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 55,816 October 4, 2014 Share October 4, 2014 "I don't know ..." He still feels unsure and the more pressure just makes him more nervous. He sits there for a while, just lost in his toughts, before he takes a big breath. "Everypony has his first time I guess. Alright, I do it. But only the very outskirts from it" Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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