Flash made OC, would like to know wht you guys think

[Dorian Gray 32]

Wanted to show these and get sum pony opinions, and maybe some help, if anypony cud maybe take one of these and make a proper signature for me to use that be stupidly awesome other than that hope you enjoy these concepts of my Original Character:

Edited March 31, 2012 by Dorian Gray

[Discovery Dream 592]

Is he missing teeth?

 

D'AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWW

[Rainboom24 46]

NOICE CUTIE MARRK

[Dragonshy 2,305]

Is he missing teeth?

 

D'AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWW

 

I don't think so. Also great job!

[Marcato 2,143]

The teeth arent as prominent as they should be in the second picture, but i am really impressed with the DETAIL! Great job!