Comrade Courage 653 January 4, 2015 Share January 4, 2015 I know you were probably expecting a pony Applebloom sorry maybe I'll get to that but I felt like doing this don't know why I really want input on this cause it is my first dress and I'm no Rarity 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neutral 1,185 January 4, 2015 Share January 4, 2015 Looks very good man. Nice job. 1 Credit to Rainbowdash72 for sig credit to Ivory for the amazing avatar credit to couleur for the wallpaper if your in hell keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,262 January 4, 2015 Share January 4, 2015 Really nice job! I love it. 2 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 4, 2015 Author Share January 4, 2015 Really nice job! I love it. thanks there anything you think I can improve on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,262 January 4, 2015 Share January 4, 2015 thanks there anything you think I can improve on? I think if anything the left eye looks a little bit messed up but other than that I don't see anything wrong with it. It still looks great though. 2 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 4, 2015 Author Share January 4, 2015 I think if anything the left eye looks a little bit messed up but other than that I don't see anything wrong with it. It still looks great though. Hurray for constructive critisizm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FirstPonySpectre 176 January 4, 2015 Share January 4, 2015 It's pretty good But.. well... Those eyes, man... It's really unsettling. It's like they're staring into your soul. Then again I've never been one the whole huge eye thing on the Human Ponies. Aside from that it's pretty good. 1 "We are legion. For we are many." Legion, Mass Effect 2 (Image not mine, btw. I plan to make my own soonish when I get the time) Credit to WheatleyCore for my avatar OCs: Bittersweet, Masquerade / Silver Tongue (Workin' on this one still) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 4, 2015 Author Share January 4, 2015 It's pretty good But.. well... Those eyes, man... It's really unsettling. It's like they're staring into your soul. Then again I've never been one the whole huge eye thing on the Human Ponies. Aside from that it's pretty good. thanks I am still working on my eyes I've never been good at them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 379 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 I know you were probably expecting a pony Applebloom sorry maybe I'll get to that but I felt like doing this don't know why I really want input on this cause it is my first dress and I'm no Rarity Apple Bloom is best CMC! 1 Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirror Silver Spoon 125 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 I know you were probably expecting a pony Applebloom sorry maybe I'll get to that but I felt like doing this don't know why I really want input on this cause it is my first dress and I'm no Rarity Adorable. I thought you meant pony Applebloom, not human Applebloom, though. 1 Help my egg, please. Click it to help it hatch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 (edited) Apple Bloom is best CMC! HOORAH, your damn right /) Adorable. I thought you meant pony Applebloom, not human Applebloom, though. oh I'm sorry I tricked you Edited January 12, 2015 by Comrade Courage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitalSpark 1,830 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 thanks I am still working on my eyes I've never been good at them I think if you're doing line drawing or monochrome, it's difficult to get anything that looks canon-like and good. You can go for canon-like, and it will look bad. Or you can go for good, but it won't look much like canon eyes. 1 ~VitalSpark~ [fimfiction] [deviantart] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirror Silver Spoon 125 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 HOORAH, your damn right /) oh I'm sorry I tricked you No, it's fine. Good job, Comrade. 1 Help my egg, please. Click it to help it hatch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 No, it's fine. Good job, Comrade. thank you milady Cupcake *bows* I appreciate it a lot I think if you're doing line drawing or monochrome, it's difficult to get anything that looks canon-like and good. You can go for canon-like, and it will look bad. Or you can go for good, but it won't look much like canon eyes. I know exactly what you mean I usually try to strike a balance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirror Silver Spoon 125 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 thank you milady Cupcake *bows* I appreciate it a lot I know exactly what you mean I usually try to strike a balance Um, I am a dude in real life. My OC is female, not me. 1 Help my egg, please. Click it to help it hatch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 Um, I am a dude in real life. My OC is female, not me. ok well I bow to OC and shake your hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirror Silver Spoon 125 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 ok well I bow to OC and shake your hand Um, ok. I guess that will work. 1 Help my egg, please. Click it to help it hatch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryzu 984 January 12, 2015 Share January 12, 2015 thanks I am still working on my eyes I've never been good at them Shading helps. It's a lot easier than you think it is to shade something, especially an eye. 1 And I won't allow you to blind those who are important to me! Looking for some friends to chat with? Join The Party Pony Plaza! Click Here! Show me who I am HERE. OCs: Faron Trail Burning Ash Wendy Skies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 12, 2015 Author Share January 12, 2015 Shading helps. It's a lot easier than you think it is to shade something, especially an eye. yeah I'm just starting to shade my pictures 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plume 922 January 13, 2015 Share January 13, 2015 Looks good! But I can't help but feel that it has an overall... Stiffness? I mean, most dresses don't stick out straight from the body, at least not ones that I've experienced XD 1 Jazz Sonata ○ Remix Blitz ○ Treble Whistler ○ Pastel Lullaby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spits 71 January 13, 2015 Share January 13, 2015 The eyes are a little bit strange, but for the rest, well done! Think the dress and shoes are the most successful part of the drawing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 14, 2015 Author Share January 14, 2015 Looks good! But I can't help but feel that it has an overall... Stiffness? I mean, most dresses don't stick out straight from the body, at least not ones that I've experienced XD Very true flowing is difficult to draw for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Letter 1,832 January 14, 2015 Share January 14, 2015 I recommend simplicity for the eyes. Less clutter that way. 1 Silver Letter!!! Silver Letter's MLP collection Have: 946 https://data.mlpmerch.com/checklist/180/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 14, 2015 Share January 14, 2015 Um, I am a dude in real life. My OC is female, not me. I wonder how he could think you were a girl, I mean the name Princess just has "Man" written all over it. =p 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 18, 2015 Author Share January 18, 2015 I wonder how he could think you were a girl, I mean the name Princess just has "Man" written all over it. =p that twas my issue it was a little confusing but I've learned with this fandom to stop assuming genders it just gets complicated I recommend simplicity for the eyes. Less clutter that way. I will give that a shot, most of my newest drawings have better eyes but I'm still working on it. I will try to take your advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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