Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 This is my first attempt at drawing Spitfire. I think it turned out really great for the most part. I hope you all like is and of course, critiques are welcome. 8 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worldfrog 121 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 (edited) .................... Edited December 10, 2020 by Tadpole 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 (edited) I really like this one but in my opinion and I know this is perspective but I don't think you have captured her fiery personality (like you did with Daring Do) but that's my opinion as well I think her head and body are a bit to close together Edited January 15, 2015 by Comrade Courage 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightFlicker 91 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 (edited) that's really good and i like the new style that you did with her mane! you should draw more ponies!!! Edited January 15, 2015 by LightFlicker 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 15, 2015 Author Share January 15, 2015 Very fancy, I like *thumbs up* Thank you. I appreciate that. I really like this one but in my opinion and I know this is perspective but I don't think you have captured her fiery personality (like you did with Daring Do) but that's my opinion as well I think her head and body are a bit to close together Thanks for the feedback. That Daring Do drawing was too unexpected. I don't think I'll top it anytime soon. I'll keep trying though. that's really good and i like the new style that you did with her mane! you should draw more ponies!!! Thank you. I definitely will be drawing more ponies. 2 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Storm Shine 1,196 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 Yays! Seems a bit nervous , unsure , and unconfident for Spitfire though.... Maybe it's a confession scene!? XD *Huggles* 1 Have no fear, The Party Pegasus Storm Shine (Pinkie's Coltfriend! (Unfortunately, this is not Hasbro Official... ) ) Is here! Along with his little brother Nimble Flight and his adopted son Grey Sky, Not to mention his childhood friend Feather Breezeheart! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 15, 2015 Author Share January 15, 2015 Yays! Seems a bit nervous , unsure , and unconfident for Spitfire though.... Maybe it's a confession scene!? XD *Huggles* *Huggles* Yeah I should've picked a better reference to use... 1 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 Thank you. I appreciate that. Thanks for the feedback. That Daring Do drawing was too unexpected. I don't think I'll top it anytime soon. I'll keep trying though. Thank you. I definitely will be drawing more ponies. don't say that, you will and when you do you'll look back and think, damn..... I AM THE GREATEST!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 15, 2015 Author Share January 15, 2015 don't say that, you will and when you do you'll look back and think, damn..... I AM THE GREATEST!! Still it was too unexpected. I hope my next drawings will be better though. 1 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna the Great of all the Russias 2,997 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 (edited) I don't know if certain things on drawing are stylistic choices, but I will assume that you were trying to replicate original image: -Jaw could be more defined by extending the line more into the body; head looks somewhat strangely attached to body. -Neck could be more defined by making it thinner. -Legs should be about x1.5 longer and widen a bit more to the hooves with smooth curves instead of straight lines. -Ear should have a curvi- -Generally, when drawing ponies, think about curving everything with the exception of horns (except that of King Sombra and Changelings). Overall drawing is not bad; form of pony is good. But there is also room for improvement; smooth curves are important as well as making each section of the pony (head, body and legs) more defined and interesting to look at. Edited January 15, 2015 by Krovavaya Luna 1 Pony Art Thread Brony since ~25 July of 2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neutral 1,185 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 Looks very good,I like it man. Keep up the good work. Credit to Rainbowdash72 for sig credit to Ivory for the amazing avatar credit to couleur for the wallpaper if your in hell keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 15, 2015 Author Share January 15, 2015 I don't know if certain things on drawing are stylistic choices, but I will assume that you were trying to replicate original image: -Jaw could be more defined by extending the line more into the body; head looks somewhat strangely attached to body. -Neck could be more defined by making it thinner. -Legs should be about x1.5 longer and widen a bit more to the hooves with smooth curves instead of straight lines. -Ear should have a curvi- -Generally, when drawing ponies, think about curving everything with the exception of horns (except that of King Sombra and Changelings). Overall drawing is not bad; form of pony is good. But there is also room for improvement; smooth curves are important as well as making each section of the pony (head, body and legs) more defined and interesting to look at. Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated. Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrubbed user 3,416 January 15, 2015 Share January 15, 2015 I heard someone say Spitfire... *looks at drawing* That's pretty good, I'd love to see more. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 15, 2015 Author Share January 15, 2015 I heard someone say Spitfire... *looks at drawing* That's pretty good, I'd love to see more. lol Thank you. I'm glad you like it. Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 19, 2015 Share January 19, 2015 This is my first attempt at drawing Spitfire. I think it turned out really great for the most part. I hope you all like is and of course, critiques are welcome. Spitfire Drawing.jpg i wish spitfire was always as cute as you have depicted her here. I don't really like her personality in the show but if you were the writer/animator i think i could be persuaded Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Kurtis 636 January 19, 2015 Share January 19, 2015 (edited) That's beautiful! It reminds me of a somewhat younger Spitfire (in a good way). Edited January 19, 2015 by Generosity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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