adventure The element of balance

[FlutterForever 330]

So I started a Fan fic a little while ago and would like to know what people think. I plan for it to be one with many seasons while having new and old characters in it. It's a story with fighting in it as well as normal stuff like in the show and even stuff about what happened in the past. Please note that this story is based off of the show and not the comics; since I haven't had the pleasure of reading them.

 

Here's the link: http://zandersoulwind.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FIM-The-element-of-balance-Chapter-one-503935787

 

All comments/feed are welcome, since I would like to improve so that writing can be my career.

[Cerulean Wings 176]

So I started a Fan fic a little while ago and would like to know what people think. I plan for it to be one with many seasons while having new and old characters in it. It's a story with fighting in it as well as normal stuff like in the show and even stuff about what happened in the past. Please note that this story is based off of the show and not the comics; since I haven't had the pleasure of reading them.

 

Here's the link: http://zandersoulwind.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FIM-The-element-of-balance-Chapter-one-503935787

 

All comments/feed are welcome, since I would like to improve so that writing can be my career.

I love to read and Im always down to support a fellow artist I look forward to it.

[FlutterForever 330]

http://zandersoulwind.deviantart.com/art/MLP-FIM-The-element-of-balance-Chapter-two-522363236?ga_submit_new=10%253A1427239027&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1&ga_recent=1

 

So here is chapter two, sorry I took so long; I wrote it up ages ago, just never checked it over until now. In most cases I don't like having to re-read my own work, it always seems boring doing so.