[Song] Who I Am - Strigidae

[Strigidae 12]

Before I say anything, I'd just like to clear up that rather than making this topic to promote my music, I'd really rather feedback

 

So that aside, hiya, I wrote a ballad for Scootaloo...Yeh, I know, Scoots song...oh well have another

 

If anypony has any feedback, comments, criticisms...feel free to share

 

Download, Lyrics and stuff like that in vid description. My YouTube channel's in the sig if you are interested in finding the vid description.

 

http://youtu.be/Y_Ha9aphDfA

 

- Strigidae

Edited February 16, 2015 by Strigidae

[The Professor...8D 823]

I enjoyed it, your "piano" is very good, along with the rest of the "instrumentals". The only problem I had with it, (if you're truly okay with criticism) is that at major points your voice "cracks".  But overall it was very good, Lyrics as well.

[Strigidae 12]

  On 2015-02-18 at 5:48 PM, The Professor said:

I enjoyed it, your "piano" is very good, along with the rest of the "instrumentals". The only problem I had with it, (if you're truly okay with criticism) is that at major points your voice "cracks". But overall it was very good, Lyrics as well.

I feel like people always get the wrong idea when I ask for feedback, in fact I love criticism because it really helps me pinpoint what to improve Glad you liked it mate

(The voice cracks are a stylistic thing but I will definitely take on board your advice)

Edited February 19, 2015 by Strigidae

[1Bit 1,531]

The instrumental was very beautiful and I thought the piano blended really well with your singing  So, yeah, pretty good work in my eyes. Keep it up!

[Sajback Gray 1]

I loved it. I like the instrumental sounds. Cool piano interacts with the rest. Good luck in the further development.