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Blizzard absorbed the snowballs and heard Radiant shout, "Woah wait Caliber. Stop for a minute Tyra's going to the outpost and not Raid, come on! Let's find out what's going on. Axe girl!!! Axe girl, what's going on? Where's our leader?! Where's Radiant?!" Blizzard started to freak out, "Oh, no oh no. Ok calm down.....*deep breath* where is Radiant? We gotta find him!"


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Tyra scowled and turned around, slapping Blizzard across the face to snap him out of his panic.

 

"Pull yourself together!" She commanded, "Radiant is too weak and injured to travel at our pace, we must get the sick and injured to the outpost first, then I will return to help him the rest of the way."

 

She looked between him and Caliber. "Can either of you two carry Icarus? I will take the crippled stallion myself."


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Radiant looked at the mare who revealed her face, she wasn't what he expected. He narrowed his eyes looking at her his stoic expression unwavering. "A true leader knows when to leave himself behind to best help the squadron. They're escorting the injured like I ordered, so I have nothing but respect for them for following what may be possiblly my last order uttered." He said limping past her. "Besides so long as the injured make it back to the outpost that's a victory in my book. And since you're here that means your not there harassing them."

 

Radiant continued limping forward leaving the mare behind him, trying his best not to show the pain he was feeling from his ribs."

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Blizzard was back in control of himself after being hit, "Ok, thanks, I needed that. I'll carry Icarus and we can get back to the outpost, but promise me, that you will bring Radiant back to us!" He then goes to Icarus, "Come on man, I gotcha. We're getting you outta here." with Icarus on his back he went back to Caliber and Tyra and said, "Are we ready to move out?"


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Mare looked at Radiant as he tryed to make some distance betwene them."But i dont care about injured,they arent fun......" and than sinisterly with much deeper voice "But on the other hand you.." she giggled for a moment "...are much more fun.I love when someone can keep up with my." Radiant was stil walking so she had to stand up and walk near him "From your glorious bunch you have most potential...hehe....to survive.But this way you are going to die in just cople of minutes." she than lowered her head and made one small but sinister smile "But i can make you live,and fight another day.For small price of course......"


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Tyra nodded, and put a hoof over her heart.

"As a Shatterhoof, I vow on my life that I will bring him home." She pledged, looking Blizzard right in the eyes.

 

She allowed him to take Icarus, and she propped the crippled pony back onto her.

"Hang on, my friend," she said, "you will be home soon."

 

She looked back to the group. "Aye, let us move out now!"


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Radiant glanced back at her seeing she was still following him. He returned his gaze forward "I can survive this cold no problem so I'll survive. So in other words that's a no to your offer." he said wrapping his scarf a little tiger on his neck. "If you wanted to kill me we both know how weak I am and that I can only defend myself for a short period, so if you came here to kill me you would of done it already. So brings up my question of why are you here."


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Blizzard was calm but still a bit worried, "Ugh, Raid may be out there on his own, but think about it guys, he wouldn't have told us to go on by ourselves if he knew we couldn't handle it, and he wouldn't have ordered us to leave him if he knew he couldn't handle it. If he has that much faith in us guys, we should have faith in him too. Am I right?!"


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"Who said i wanted to kill you honey,did i done anything to you so you whould think that...I'm just offended by that...." she stoped following "I thinked you are beter than this..." she that started to laugh "Sorry i can't do that with straight face.But seriously.." she quickly started to walk and again was near Radiant "...dont you think some people will be disappointed that Royal Guard like you died not in glorious battle defending..." now darker and with much more deeper voice "...Equestria..." than again with cheerfully voice "...but died by cold.Where is the song in that.What would you gravestone sad after that 'Here's lies Radiant,he liked pies',but most of all what do you think your family ..." she again head that sinister smile "..would think of you than?"


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Radiant continued forward "I didn't say you wanted to kill me, I was saying you didn't otherwise you would of killed me already. With the magic I've seen you preform I wouldn't stand a chance in my state." Radiant stated as he continued forward. "I have given my entire life in service to the princess and equestria. If I die then so be it, so long as my team and those injured ponies are safe."

 

Radiant stopped for a.second looking to his side for second. He looked forward and continued walking. "Besides I have no family." He admitted.


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Tyra nodded, keeping her gaze ahead.

 

"Aye, exactly," she agreed, "he is our leader, and I trust his decisions. I will see his request through, and I will return to help him the rest of the way home."

 

She looked back to Blizzard, stern and unmoving in her decision.

"I made a vow to these ponies to get them home, and to him and you that he would come back safe."


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"You whant to change rolls because i want to change em..." she pulled some sort of device with one button on it  "...What if I told you I can kill injured ones and your group with em with just one push of a button...Well not all il let short stuff to live,i relly like her with her axe swing and her anger.She would be lovely toy.<sigh>.." she  quickly shaked her head "Look at my ..Ha.. im going off topic here.Point is you can save em and not be remembered in history like killer of injured and backstabbing traitor.You just accept my deal and we all can go happy our ways.Tick tock honey..." she stoped and sinisterly continue "Tick.......Tock......."


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Blizzard wore this expression,  :pinkie: and said, "Yeah thanks! I'm so glad to have mad so many new trustworthy friends! I'd hug you right now, but my hooves are full. But anyway hope Radiant is ok, heh the trooper is probably limping his way to us right now. And he'll probably make it back a few minutes after we do. No fear guys! Raid will come through!"


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Radiant stopped in his tracks suddenly and turned back to block the mares path. She bumped into his chest and he winced at the sudden surge of pain. He stood back up erect with a stern look on his face glaring at the mare "What are you going on about, why would you find pleasure in killing innocents.If they are no fun for you to play with as you so put it, then why threaten their lives? What have you planted on them? Tell me now!" He barked slowly becoming more infuriated when the mare threatened his team along with the innocents.


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"Planted on them?They are too smart for that...But on other hand you dear Ice friend isnt so smart you know that....He carries explosives in his bags and he didn't notice em." she started to laugh "Morons are everywhere.And that sweetheart.....is there leader." she started to laugh once again "But you know you can stop all off this just accept my deal...." she than put her hoof on button "Not much more time honey.Choose wisely...."

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Radiant glared at the mare trying to read if she were bluffing Or not. He couldn't read her well enough to make a definitive choice. His expression changed to.worry as he dropped his head letting out a large sigh. "Fine do to me what you will, just do not harm them or the prisoners." He said in defeat.

 

Radiant lifted his head looking up to the sky above and prepared for what was to follow. He wasn't anticipating death but probably something much worse.


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"Toughest can fall like house of card you just need to find weak spot..." she than pulled some sort of helmet from her bag and slammed it on his head.She than started to dig tru her bag "Where is it...I know that b@#$h made it.." she than pulled some sort of potion from her bag "Aha.Ok drink this and we have a deal.Or you whant  my to blow them sky high." she again had that sinister smile on her face....

(OOC: when you drinke it you will start geting your power back,but helmet will drain all your magic power.And so you wont be able to use magic for couple of hours or days we will talk later about it)


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Blizzard was trotting along just fine, but then he stopped, "Just one quick peek at Rarilove...." he though as he reached for his magazine but then he stopped himself and thought, "No. Now is not the time for goofing around with a magazine. We gotta get back to the outpost as soon as possible." He continued to walk with his team to the outpost.

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as Radiant was looking up at the suddenly a helmet was slammed on top of his head. He glared down at the mare who was holding out a potion to him. She told him to drink it or else he loses his team and the prisoners.

 

He looked at the potion taking it with his hoof. "If you have any sense of honor, please honor my last request to you from a guard captain who has just trained his own honor by surrendering. Spare the others and you may kill me if you so please." He said as he rose the bottle to his lips drinking the potion.

 

As the potion worked its way through his body he felt warm. He could feel his magical energy returning to his body "what is this mare playing at replenishing my energy?" He thought himself.


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"My job here is done thank you on your cooperation,you can keep helmet..." she started to walk away "...I believe this will stay a secret.Or els idiot gets it." she looked at button "You whant this button i dont need it anny more?Yes,no?" she pushed the button as she shadows grabbed her and pulled her down "Here you go anyway.Say hello to you little friends..." she started to laugh maniacally as she disappeared.
As device reached Radiant it dropped little message

You beter run now my king......




(OOC so you wont have powers ~25-26h,noting important won't happen to force you to use em.Button was fake,noting happened but Radiant still don't know that)

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Radiant looked down at the note feeling replenished. he glanced back up to his head "well with my powers back I can handle an explosion so I have time to get this ridiculous thing off me" he said as he pried the helmet off with his hooves.

 

As the helmet hit the ground Radiant turned only to realize he felt extremely weak suddenly. His magic had been completely depleted. "Crap what did that bitch do to me?" He questions as hus vision begun to blur and his breathing became heavy.

 

As he attempted to take one step he fell forward into the snow face first. "Crap that thing is going to blow, I have to move!" He mumbled to himself through the snow.

 

He begun forcing himself to his hooves against the onset fatigue and the pain of his ribs. As he was halfway to standing up his legs began to wobble uncontrollably.

 

He collapsed once again into the snow "Shit, well this is pathetic. A guard captain to fatigued to pull himself up. what a disgrace I am, thankfully no pony is here to see this." He thought to himself as he dropped his head in the snow, prepared for his demise.


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Blizzard had the outpost in faint sight really far away, "Hey guys! I can see the outpost We're getting closer! Yes! We'll be back to our safety zone soon guys. Just hold on a bit longer Icarus you'll feel better soon." Then Blizzard thought, "How unfortunately ironic for a doc to need help."  "After we get back, axe girl, we're gonna go looking for Radiant! Caliber you stay with the doc."

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As Radiant laid in the snow he realized the device she dropped wasn't going to explode. Upon this realization he let out a sign "so the note was lying, I should of known with that twisted mare." he said to himself.

 

Radiant decided to try once more to get up on all four hooves. Once again before he could fully stand his legs collapsed dropping him back in the snow. "I feel as if I'm not recovering any energy at all now. So I guess I get a slow death rather then a quick one." He said to himself continuing to lie in the snow.


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Tyra walked toward the outpost, just barely having it in her sights herself.

 

"Aye," she nodded, "he is still out there, and he needs us."

 

She glanced up to the pony on her back, who had raised his head to look in front.

 

"Are we...nearly there?" He asked softly.

"Aye," she nodded, "we are close now."

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Blizzard was enthused as he walked to the outpost , "I can't wait to find Radiant! And hey...we never finished our snowball fight.  :sneer:  After we get Radiant back to the outpost, let's settle our snowy dispute ok? Maybe we can get the local foals to join us and have a snowball war! But first let's get to the out post and the our leader back! I think we're getting closer."

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