ooc Bangcolt Arena! (Fighting/Sol) (OOC)

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

My god...the quality of OCs is back on the rise...

 

It really isn't that good, i slung it together. I apologize it's not my best but i appreciate your compliment though. 

[J.R. 3,183]

i feel inspired to make my OC's better! 

Cannot tell if serious or sarcastic. :okiedokielokie:

Edited June 2, 2015 by Ice Blizzard

[Unicorncob 5,692]

It really isn't that good, i slung it together. I apologize it's not my best but i appreciate your compliment though. 

 

Hey, it's really good! You really took time into putting a good character together

Was that sarcasm? :okiedokielokie:

 

Is someone getting a bit lime jelly?

[Dust and Memories 557]

The longer and more involved the personality is beyond a certain point, the more restricted you are in your roleplaying, and half the backstory makes no scientific or canon sense whatsoever.

 

 

But, you know, it's good.

[J.R. 3,183]

Hey, it's really good! You really took time into putting a good character together

 

Is someone getting a bit lime jelly?

Why would I be jelly? I helped him and approved of his OCs details via skype.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

The longer and more involved the personality is beyond a certain point, the more restricted you are in your roleplaying, and half the backstory makes no scientific or canon sense whatsoever. But, you know, it's good.

 

Mine? 

[Unicorncob 5,692]

Why would I be jelly? I helped him and approved of his OCs details via skype.

 

And yet you seemed to look rather upset when I complimented your friend

[Dust and Memories 557]

Mine?

 

*awkward cough*

 

Ahm, yes.

[J.R. 3,183]

And yet you seemed to look rather upset when I complimented your friend

I am really on edge between serious and sarcasm today. Sorry.

[Unicorncob 5,692]

I am really on edge between serious and sarcasm today. Sorry.

 

To be fair sarcasm is hard to detect in text

And I am a bit of a snarky douche a lot of the time

[J.R. 3,183]

To be fair sarcasm is hard to detect in text

And I am a bit of a snarky douche a lot of the time

Agreed old man, agreed.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

yes, awkward cough*

 

 

I'm sorry if this is blunt... but I understand that it's not Grade "A" but i couldn't imagine how it would be hard to follow, perhaps a  little rushed but I just can't simply see how you could be thrown off by it. Explain to me so i can help you

Also their is a reason I made my character the way i did when it comes to personality, it's the way I, personally, do things so that's my preference and please keep in mind that this is my first Roleplay.

[Dust and Memories 557]

I'm sorry if this is blunt... but I understand that it's not Grade "A" but i couldn't imagine how it would be hard to follow, perhaps a  little rushed but I just can't simply see how you could be thrown off by it. Explain to me so i can help you

Also their is a reason I made my character the way i did when it comes to personality, it's the way I, personally, do things so that's my preference and please keep in mind that this is my first Roleplay.

The personality is fine, it's merely a statement/advice. And as for flow, the flow is fine; I just can't imagine around 22% of the stuff in Tracer's backstory occuring in Equestria. Also, again, the scientific inaccuracy of some of the profile. For example, you say he tested the effects of cyanide on various rocks; you don't seem to be aware that cyanide s a dry powder with its only value the potential it has for use against organic material, namely the fact that it causes heart failure.

 

While most wouldn't be bothered by it or even notice the inaccuracies, it nags at me whenever I read through the profile. Of course, this is merely my personal opinion and I am not representative of the majority, but a good proofreader would truly get this backstory to A+ quality.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

The personality is fine, it's merely a statement/advice. And as for flow, the flow is fine; I just can't imagine around 22% of the stuff in Tracer's backstory occuring in Equestria. Also, again, the scientific inaccuracy of some of the profile. For example, you say he tested the effects of cyanide on various rocks; you don't seem to be aware that cyanide s a dry powder with its only value the potential it has for use against organic material, namely the fact that it causes heart failure. While most wouldn't be bothered by it or even notice the inaccuracies, it nags at me whenever I read through the profile. Of course, this is merely my personal opinion and I am not representative of the majority, but a good proofreader would truly get this backstory to A+ quality.

 

I love how you say 22%, so exact XD

 

And cyanide is a powder? Eh... Do i have to go back and change it? It seems like effort XD But I'm no Scientist, I mean i get B's in my science class.... I'm not very good at it so I don't bother myself with my faults in it. But if you really want me to go research poison and change it, i will, just for you Orion

[Dust and Memories 557]

Well you did take his virginity -_-

 

 

 

This is your home.

 

That face needs to be the face Twilight makes when Wilhelm rekts her.

 

 

I love how you say 22%, so exact XD

 

And cyanide is a powder? Eh... Do i have to go back and change it? It seems like effort XD But I'm no Scientist, I mean i get B's in my science class.... I'm not very good at it so I don't bother myself with my faults in it. But if you really want me to go research poison and change it, i will, just for you Orion

Oh, there's no need to change it on my account. Hell, if I have time over the next few days, I'll do it myself if I think it needs to be corrected. However, if you wish to correct that part of the backstory, all you have to do is change wherever cyanide appears to "sulfuric acid" and you'll be fine.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

Actually... i did a bit of research. Cyanide can be liquidated, I'm not trying to call you out but according to what I'm reading Cyanide CAN be found in liquid form

 

What you're most likely thinking about is Sodium Cyanide which is a white powdery substance, however hydrogen cyanide is a colorless liquid.

 

 

This is your home.  

 

Well... What if i want a different home. What are you gonna do then? 

[Dust and Memories 557]

Actually... i did a bit of research. Cyanide can be liquidated, I'm not trying to call you out but according to what I'm reading Cyanide CAN be found in liquid form

 

What you're most likely thinking about is Sodium Cyanide which is a white powdery substance, however hydrogen cyanide is a colorless liquid.

 

 

Well... What if i want a different home. What are you gonna do then?

 

You're correct; however, cyanide exhibits no naturally acidic qualities, and thus would show no effect on rock.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

You're correct; however, cyanide exhibits no naturally acidic qualities, and thus would show no effect on rock.

 

You know what... you clearly know far more than I do. Whatever you say goes XD, I'm just going to trust your expertise 

[Mars Orbit 729]

Hi guys.

Wut miss?

[Vae Victis 742]

@

 

Hey, welcome to the RP!

 

Are you also from Kentucky? Just wondering. You know, from the name and such

[J.R. 3,183]

@

 

Hey, welcome to the RP!

 

Are you also from Kentucky? Just wondering. You know, from the name and such

Poor dude's internet is crapping up. :/ I know via skype.

 

Also, this ship may turn out ok.

[Vae Victis 742]

Poor dude's internet is crapping up. :/ I know via skype.

 

Also, this ship may turn out ok.

If so, this would be my maiden voyage.

[J.R. 3,183]

If so, this would be my maiden voyage.

Maiden Voyage? What?

[Vae Victis 742]

Maiden Voyage? What?

Vernacular for the first time that a ship sets sail after its construction. I was using it as a pun to express that this was my first time shipping XD.

[J.R. 3,183]

Vernacular for the first time that a ship sets sail after its construction. I was using it as a pun to express that this was my first time shipping XD.

Nice. I wish goddamn Pony Creator would cooperate so you'd know what Darkrai looks like.