sad Equestria's fall (not complete)

[Ponyguy4ever 84]

(Before I start, this is my first fan fiction)

 

Back in the time of the rule of Princess

Celestia and Princess Luna. Everything

seem'd happy and cheerful, until

darkness came onto Equestria somehow it

grew in the deaths of Manehattan. Of

cource Twilight Sparkle "The Princess of Friendship" tried to stop it, but soon

she failed. The darkness was to strong, it was overwhelming to the Mane 6 along with the most valuable ponies of Equestria.

[twilightfan28 52]

I think its a good idea to start with

[Ponyguy4ever 84]

Thanks I hope it gets a lot more interesting.

[twilightfan28 52]

Any way i can help?? I would love to

[Ponyguy4ever 84]

Please? I do need help, Its my first fanfic after all.

[twilightfan28 52]

Maybe start with the start of how the darkness grew/came into equestria.. how it spread... how it got its power

[Burning Dusk 46]

You could also explain how celestia and luna was affected. Was there power lost. What happens to all the dark magic users due to the dark magic increasing. Why did this darkness happen. 

 

I hope this is of use.