I've Been Dreaming of Sunshine and Celery Stalks

[iblank2apples 7]

i did another one let me know what you think

 

[JonasDarkmane 19,790]

That is a really good song . I really enjoyed it ^w^. Great job  . 

['Tia Leaf 200]

This is incredibly enjoyable. You have done a fantastic job on this song.

[DND 2,355]

Fantastic work! At a few parts especially, it kinda reminded me of a style I enjoy very much from a band called Anamanaguchi. 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

This is really good right here. Loved how you incorporated the melodies from "At the Gala" and "Winter Wrap up" in to the progression. Although, there was one thing about the progression that nagged me just a tad. You could've gone from the vi to the I since the vi is the relative minor to the I

 

So, here's what you have

 

vi-vi-V-IV

 

Here's what I suggest

 

vi-I-V-IV

 

Other than that, it's a very well crafted piece. If you don't understand what I explained, let me know. 

[Magic Rasin 180]

  Wow. That was a really good song man! Keep up the music making.

[FritzyBeat 26]

I am still absolutely in love with this track btw ;3