critique wanted Hello, I created a video a few months ago and I want to know your feedback

[AdventurousEddie 18]

This was an old project I started after becoming a brony and I started of with quite a few ponies then grew a liking to Trixie, so I created a car for her in Midnight Club L.A. I've never gotten any feedback from any bronies or pegasisters. PLease leave your feedback and who should I do next

 

Link:

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ur7GlJyzN94

 

Music:

Sunset by Royal Pony

[Moony the Cat 3,702]

Im not a good critic nor have i any idea of car games, but your two car designs look really good 

If they would be available on Ridge Racer, i would definitely only play with those cars. 

 

I dont know, if i should post here or on Youtube which car i would want to be done next, so i post on both sites :

 

Um, maybe Twilight? 

[Lunar Echo 10,335]

Looks great mate, can't wait to see more!