critique wanted Hope Poster Parody w/ Sonata Dusk

[PacificGreen 1,163]

Just finished making an Obama Hope Poster parody for Sonata Dusk.

 

Any critique or advice you can give? I'd like to make it as much in the style of the Obama posters while a the same time keeping the EqG look, so any insightful or otherwise helpful advice is appreciated.

 

[Noonenew12 89]

I am a sucker for a good Hope poster parody 

 

Maybe the next step could be getting some shading in there. If you really look close to the poster, they have these shade lines:

 

 

Would be interesting to see this used in the picture.

 

But even if you don't, still a great quality piece of work, well done

[AzureNightLight 122]

The shirt she was wearing got me for a moment. Like it seems.... very..... un-Sonata like. Oh and make sure to draw in the lines for her teeth.

[PacificGreen 1,163]

I am a sucker for a good Hope poster parody 

 

Maybe the next step could be getting some shading in there. If you really look close to the poster, they have these shade lines:

 

Would be interesting to see this used in the picture.

 

But even if you don't, still a great quality piece of work, well done

Late reply is kinda late.

 

As cool as that idea sounds, I'm not quite sure it will work the the EqG characters, given that the show doesn't use shading very much. But hey, maybe someone can prove me wrong.

 

The shirt she was wearing got me for a moment. Like it seems.... very..... un-Sonata like. Oh and make sure to draw in the lines for her teeth.

 

Thanks. I tried to use the shirt she regularly wears as a reference...perhaps it's the shape of the shirt that seems a little off.