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Interesting style, even if a little creepy x) Good work!

 

Thanks for the comment :3

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Well, your lines got more consistent and you have higher detailed shading. But not really that much has been changed.

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I like your style, dark things are always a favorite of mine. Is there anything in particular you want a critique of?

 

For now, I would recommend studying/practicing anatomy since it's very useful for the style you seem to be going for. In particular, the deltoid and head of the humerus should push the shoulders outwards a bit more, and in bony/starving bodies, in addition to the other ribs, you should see the bottom edge of the ribcage very defined (it looks like a W). Something like this:

 

 

 

 

You might find it useful to draw a skeleton and then just put skin/muscle on top of it.  :P Of course, no need to make it super realistic, just simplify things as you go


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There's nothing more amazing in an artist is progression in their craft! Fantastic to see your improving.

 

Can't wait to see what the future brings with your art :D

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