My Fanfics

[vanoreo 3]

I wrote a couple of fan fiction stories, one was from about a month or two ago, and the other is from just last week, I hope you enjoy them, I will accept criticism, (but leave note that I am terrible with English, I just want feedback on the actual storyline) I hope you enjoy

 

10 pages double spaced "John": https://docs.google....2nfs/edit?pli=1

 

3.5 pages double spaced "Scootaloo": https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-k_xPlcxqtrbXUXbxU_R0y01ZbH_fxG6G7JinNZUii8/edit

[Ham is tasty 33]

I liked the John one I actually read all ten pages I usually just skim or read the ending of things longer than a page.

[Lightning Bolty the filly 29]

i liked John the best also. good job