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I have a lot of OCs, each one feels 'finished' but I think that only with another person's help, I can see if they really are.

 

Serenity

Francis

Zephyr

Nectar

Crystal

Astral Star

Misty

Zealous Enigma

 

Constructive criticism is appreciated.

Edited by Frannis

You have your whole life left, so much to do, so much time to do it.

Use it wisely; Because you will never get a second chance.

 

Ocs https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KsjJPI0_DDAFarIByu6GZmrqhUgnKZO5Uu1zC0rXW6w/edit

Tumblr:https://special-minds.tumblr.com

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They all have a good solid base, a really good outline. I feel like there just needs to be a bit of meat added to give it a bit more feeling. You want to know about each pony, not just where they grew up, how they got their cutie mark and where they ended up. 

 

I feel like once you add just a bit more detail to the backstory and even a bit more to the personality they will all be wonderful! :kindness: 

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