critique wanted Looking for critiques on my fic 'The Meaning of Harmony'

[KatonRyu 1,033]

A short while I ago, I resumed work on my fanfic, The Meaning of Harmony. If anyone would like to give me feedback on it, I'd be very grateful. Thank you very much in advance!

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/245227/the-meaning-of-harmony

[Prospekt 11,018]

@KatonRyu I'm still fairly new to the world of fanfic writing, so I can't really give very formal feedback. But, just from the synopsis and the feedback it seems to have already gotten, yours looks like it could be an enjoyable read. I'll take a look and comment on my thoughts once I'm through with what you've got so far.

Oh, and I just followed you on Fimfiction.

Edited February 2, 2018 by Prospekt