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Okay, first im some months without make this kind of art, because take much time, but im very excited to back and bring this again :)

 

I really need all the feedback to improve my arts, and if are good what i should do next?

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I quite like the mane and hair - however, due to the white background and white coat {as a point of note, Celly is more of a light pink}, it's really hard to tell what the proportions are. I like the facial expression, however, the eye is a little bit too big, almost extending past the skull.

I hope that helps.

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7 hours ago, Quinch said:

I quite like the mane and hair - however, due to the white background and white coat {as a point of note, Celly is more of a light pink}, it's really hard to tell what the proportions are. I like the facial expression, however, the eye is a little bit too big, almost extending past the skull.

I hope that helps.

Thank you, maybe i get lost by the white and light pink effect i tried to do, thank you about feedback i going try to improve for next art


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