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A Dark Path.


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As they walked with the patrol, Cheetahpaw scented the air toward the twoleg place, he smelled a rabbit and a mouse, he found his excuse. Padding up to the warriors, he said "I can smell some prey toward twoleg place, mind if me and Sandpaw go to hunt a little to add to the pile?" after a moments thought, the warrior nodded "Don't go far" he said. Cheetahpaw nodded and turned to Sandpaw, "Let's go!" he said happily.


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Cheetahpaw led her toward twoleg place. At one point, he stopped her and said "Wait" and padded off, after a moment, he returned with a dead mouse and rabbit which he buried, then led her onward. "The other day I saw this HUGE twoleg monster mulling about in that bare part of woods near twoleg place. It's the first I've ever seen OFF the thunder path!!" he said excitedly.


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Sandpaws ears twitched, she was scared of being near the two legs place.

She blinked “Monsters go off the Thunder path?!” she said shocked.

how is he not scared? I can’t be scared ether she decided

She started to followed Cheetahpaw almost paw to paw movements .

Opening her mouth she let the sent in, she could smell dog, monsters and Twolegs.

They are all old but something still made the fur on the back of her neck stick up.

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Cheetahpaw felt a surge of excitement as they traveled further. There was something about danger that he always found so invigorating, and this was no different. They continued and soon came into a clearing in the trees. There in front of them was a huge yellow monster, it didn't have the four paws like normal monsters, this had a gigantic claw that hung in front of it. "I've never seen a monster so big before!!"

 

((it is a bulldozer they see))


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Sandpaw followed Cheetahpaw without question.

She was looking at the ground most of the time, watching her white paws get dusty.

Looking up at hearing what he said, her mouth dropped open and ears pinned back to her head.

“What’s that” she whispered, before dropping into a crouch.

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Cheetahpaw shrugged, his eyes showing excitement and curiosity. "Don't know, but when it's awake, it makes the most awful racket! And black smoke spews out of its head!" he replied. He slowly walked forward, his nose wrinkling at the foul stench of the sleeping monster.


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Sandpaw blinked, “Is it ill?” she asked.

Before padding lightly over to the monster.

She poked her paw against it, feeling how cold it was to the touch.

Moving ever closer to it she jumped up on the wheel arch.

“It’s so cold on my paws” She told him.

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Sandpaw nodded “Thank star clan for us, or we’d be dog food” she said.

She started to looked around the monster, her fears had been replaced with Advancer.

Jumping up onto the hood of the monster she looked in side.

“So this is belly were the two legs go” she said looking inside.

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Sandpaw jumped in with him, bouncing up off the seat.

She blinked “What kind of belly is this?” she questioned.

She pawed at the lever and with crunching noise it went down.

Sandpaw quickly retreated back into the seat.

“What did that do?” she whispered.

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"H-Hello Spottedstar. I-I wanted to ask you about m-my training... I... I really don't w-want to be a warrior. I'm a b-brilliant hunter, but not good a-at much else..." he said nervously looking cautiously at the clan leader.


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Geronimo!

Allons-y !

Fantastic!

AND THEN I ATE ALL THE PIE.

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Cheetahpaw jumped at the sudden noise, but let out a mrrow of laughter afterward. He went up to the front of the belly and saw the large claw had lowered. "I think you made it lower it's claw" he replied "Come look"


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Sandpaw jumps out of the monster and followed Cheetahpaw.

“That was so cool” she shirked in happiness.

She got back to the two leg path just before the thunder clan territory.

 

* * *

 

Spottedstar smiled, “Star clan put you here for a reason” she told him.

She stopped tapping her tail and folded over her forepaws.

“Maybe, becoming close to the star clan is what you need.”

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Cheetahpaw smiled in agreement, "Told you my exploring isn't just dangerous!" he said. They went to the buried fresh kill, but before they left for the entrance, Cheetahpaw rolled in the forest leaves. "It takes the monsters stench off" he explained.


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Shadepaw nodded sadly.

"Thank you for your wisdom Spottedstar. I shall go see the healer at day break." Shadepaw bowed and left the den with his head bowed, and his tail swishing absently.


All my favorite Doctors. 9 10 and 11 AREN'T JUST NUMBERS :3

Geronimo!

Allons-y !

Fantastic!

AND THEN I ATE ALL THE PIE.

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Sandpaw looked at him and pulled a face.

She jumped in to leaves and rolled in them.

Getting up and shook all of the leaves off of her.

She started to pad towards the patrol.

 

* * *

 

Spottedstars ears twitched, “don’t worry young one, there will be a place for you” she told her self.

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Cheetahpaw took the rabbit and mouse and joined Sandpaw to the patrol. The patrol didn't suspect anything and they returned to the clan camp where Cheetahpaw placed the prey on the fresh kill pile. He turned to Sandpaw, "What do you want to do now?" he asked.


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