The Friendship games

[benben471 66]

Since I've been wanting to get back into writing and have been reading and watching The Hunger Games, I decided to make a Crossover of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic and The Hunger Games Called The Friendship Games. I will post a chapter every Friday. The link to this fic is below:

 

http://www.fanfictio...riendship_Games

 

Please give as much constrictive criticism and feedback as possible I will need it because I'm still a bit rusty in my writing.

 

EDIT: Couldn't write yesterday because i am too busy sorry everypony. Because of this I'll be writing 2 chapters Today and tomorrow to make up for this fact.These will be posted on tomorrow

Edited June 30, 2012 by benben471

[Caramel Medley 38]

You write like a pro, but try to use the original plot less and put more of your own ideas into the story But I still like what your doing! I'm looking forward for more!!

[benben471 66]

 

You write like a pro, but try to use the original plot less and put more of your own ideas into the story But I still like what your doing! I'm looking forward for more!!

 

 

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoy it.This is the only part of the original plot i'll be using. As soon as the characters are in the arena the original ideas will be coming

[Caramel Medley 38]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you enjoy it.This is the only part of the original plot i'll be using. As soon as the characters are in the arena the original ideas will be coming

 

Sounds good As I said, I'm waiting for Friday