Starstream 182 July 7, 2012 Share July 7, 2012 (edited) What it says in the title. I'm trying some stuff I've never done before with a program I'm relatively new to, so I would like to have some feedback. Edit: *RAAAAAGE* I'm trying to do the shading but my computer screen SUCKS at displaying contrast between colours. Can someone please tell me when I blunder? Edited July 14, 2012 by Zhinzo 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I used to be a stranger 7,993 July 7, 2012 Share July 7, 2012 Mouth is too high and missing a nose. Ear should be angled in such a way that the opposite ear would make sense to be not visible. That, or keep the ear as-is and show the other ear that's behind the mane. Round out the left elbow Looks pretty awesome, great work! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireboy436 1 July 7, 2012 Share July 7, 2012 Sword looks a little plain, but other then that, It looks GREAT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bohtty 1,775 July 7, 2012 Share July 7, 2012 1. Don't save as a jpg. Always png. 2. The wings look limp which isn't really a characteristic of a feather. 3. The sword's lines are too wobbly, I think the image would benefit from using straight lines on those. Otherwise the form is surprisingly well done. Keep up the good work. Legit signature made by Shift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azura 1,107 July 7, 2012 Share July 7, 2012 It looks like me. My Signature Shop!-=-=-=-=-Art Collection!-=-=-=-=-A Signature Tutorial! Also known as "Cloud Chaser". My Ponysona, Azura. Avatar & Signature by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Have Left MLP Forums 100 July 7, 2012 Share July 7, 2012 More detail on face and body needed. STREAMING LIVE! Quote my Posts if you want me to see your reply please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starstream 182 July 8, 2012 Author Share July 8, 2012 Mouth is too high and missing a nose. Silly Blue, that isn't the mouth, that's the outline for the snout. Ear should be angled in such a way that the opposite ear would make sense to be not visible. That, or keep the ear as-is and show the other ear that's behind the mane. Yeeeaah... I think I'll add the other ear. Round out the left elbow 1. Don't save as a jpg. Always png. More detail on face and body needed. Aye aye! Will comply! Sword looks a little plain, Trust me, there's not much for me to work with. Pretty much all that's left is the shading, but I'll cross that line when I get there. 2. The wings look limp which isn't really a characteristic of a feather. 3. The sword's lines are too wobbly, I think the image would benefit from using straight lines on those. *Sigh*Great, several hours spent on the wings and the flaws are still noticeable. Welp, back to the drawing board it is for me. Also, I suck at drawing straight lines, any tips? It looks like me. I sure hope it does, otherwise I suck at drawing you. Looks pretty awesome, great work! but other then that, It looks GREAT! Otherwise the form is surprisingly well done. Keep up the good work. Thanks guys. Much appreciated. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawberry Tart 161 July 8, 2012 Share July 8, 2012 The left elbow is too near the hoof, or end of the leg. Maybe that's a wrist, but if it is, then there should be some sign that there's an elbow, too. The pony is missing a nose and the mouth is too high, maybe that's what you wanted though. The neck is bent back at a very uncomfortable-looking angle, which isn't that bad, but I'm not sure you would want it that way. I like the way the wings and mane are made, very detailed and carefully done. The line is very smooth, too I really like your drawing. Credit to MatrixChicken for Signature Credit to Генерал Четник for Avatar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starstream 182 July 8, 2012 Author Share July 8, 2012 Mouth is too high and missing a nose. The pony is missing a nose and the mouth is too high, maybe that's what you wanted though. Haven't had much time to work on it, but I hope this at least clears up the confusion around the facial structure. *nervous laughter* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
go away seb 367 July 8, 2012 Share July 8, 2012 The muzzle is too wide and (if this is supposed to be Cloud Chaser) the hair is supposed to have 2 colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starstream 182 July 8, 2012 Author Share July 8, 2012 (if this is supposed to be Cloud Chaser) the hair is supposed to have 2 colors. You'll notice that at this point, the image is almost completely devoid of shading. All I can really say is: I'm getting there, I'm just not sure how I'm going to do it yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonyBrony 275 July 8, 2012 Share July 8, 2012 This is great! And being the non-artistically-inclined brony that I am, I can't give much advice. I just think the eye expression doesn't really fit the fact that there's a sword, but I don't know the Phony Brony Signature by the one and only Flare! Eugepae! Being ignored since May 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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