visual art Croaks' "Art"

[Croaks 251]

I like to do things sometimes.

Here are some things.

Things.

Some.

._.

 

Here's a face I drew out of boredom:

 

 

 

A sunrise. Sunset. I don't even know.

 

 

 

An older painting.

 

 

 

That's basically what I'm most proud of, although it's almost nothing.

Maybe I'll update this. I dunno.

Edited July 8, 2012 by Zee Captain (Croaks)

[Rezo 220]

That mountain painting is nice, and the beach painting would be perfect if the trees were a bit more smooth and evenly stroked

 

All in all, awesome work!

[Jokuc 8,174]

They are good! I love the 2nd one :3

[Nightfall 3,950]

It's more of a sunset.

 

I've seen both here in Hawaii.

[Finesthour 7,289]

Seperate critiques-

 

 

• Not bad for a sketch, but there are obvious flaws.
• The pupils seem... lifeless.
• Expression is non-existant

3/5

• You are much more talented with drawing environments. It seems to be jumping out of the page.
• The way you colored the sun makes it seem like it is shining.
• The clouds coloring reacts with the clouds, making them seem realistic
• The trees... well the bases don't look like trees. They are all sketchy.

Nit-picking aside, this is a great piece.

4/5

• As I said before, your environment paintings are stunning.
• The sunset is magnificent.
• The tree on the right hand side has no base, or bark. Jokes aside, the foliage is completely covering it while the other trees have visable bark.
• That dirt road looks incredibly muddy and dangerous

4.5/5

 

 

Edited July 9, 2012 by Crona

[Croaks 251]

That mountain painting is nice, and the beach painting would be perfect if the trees were a bit more smooth and evenly stroked

 

All in all, awesome work!

 

Thanks :3

They are good! I love the 2nd one :3

 

That's probably my favorite as well, thank you.

Seperate critiques-

 

 

• Not bad for a sketch, but there are obvious flaws.
• The pupils seem... lifeless.
• Expression is non-existant

3/5

• You are much more talented with drawing environments. It seems to be jumping out of the page.
• The way you colored the sun makes it seem like it is shining.
• The clouds coloring reacts with the clouds, making them seem realistic
• The trees... well the bases don't look like trees. They are all sketchy.

Nit-picking aside, this is a great piece.

4/5

• As I said before, your environment paintings are stunning.
• The sunset is magnificent.
• The tree on the right hand side has no base, or bark. Jokes aside, the foliage is completely covering it while the other trees have visable bark.
• That dirt road looks incredibly muddy and dangerous

4.5/5

 

 

 

Thank you so much for your feedback, I'll be sure to improve.

[One 498]

The one with the mountain is very nice! The face one seems to me like it has thicker brows then I would expect, but hey, its your drawing and since I couldnt do better I cant really say bad things about it.