ooc [OOC] Equestrian War

[InfinityWhale 771]

While I'm not preoccupied, I might just write something, y'know, part of the backstory. Just for fun, nothing full-blown, one-shot at the most.

[Nightfall 3,950]

While I'm not preoccupied, I might just write something, y'know, part of the backstory. Just for fun, nothing full-blown, one-shot at the most.

 

If you need any help, I can come up with ideas.

 

Good luck!

[InfinityWhale 771]

If you need any help, I can come up with ideas.

 

Good luck!

 

That might be helpful. Plus, it'd kinda cool to throw in Nightfall, if for no more than because he's the most established character in the setting. If I had art skills, I'd prolly make a "Ask Wits End" tumblr, but I lack those.

[Abaddon 95]

Nah. We'll think of something, and get you in there soon.

 

Awesome, I'll be on tomorrow for sure, most likely around 330 pm pacific time, or maybe a little later, its just been a weird few days that has kept me from actively participating in the forums.

 

Hey on the subject of shipping within this story.

 

It may sound a bit off, but if the eventuality of a relationship occurs between any characters. Why not write a side story for a 'close encounter' or a date or something.

 

Or even write about Vinyl and Nightfall's experience at her house.

 

or clop

 

It's potential people!!

 

Besides, I wanna start writing fics! Maybe even romance ones? Anyone wanna collaborate?

 

I'd be interested in helping you, or at least working on something as I'm trying to use my rp experience to move into fan fics.

Edited July 23, 2012 by Abaddon

[InfinityWhale 771]

http://mlpforums.com/topic/25816-equestrian-wars-side-stories/

 

Alright, I finished my first one, and created a thread to house them all. It's short, but I think it's pretty good.

[Nightfall 3,950]

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.... WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU JUST POST?!

(alright calm down calm down)

WHY WOULD YOU GOD MOD LIKE THAT!??!

 

Please see the PM I just sent you, jdor.

[Nightfall 3,950]

I'm afraid it was necessary, Striker.

 

i did...

 

You had incorrect grammar in almost every post, if not every post, which automatically causes harm to any RP.

Edited July 24, 2012 by Nightfall

[jdor11 91]

I'm afraid it was necessary, Striker.

You had incorrect grammar in almost every post, if not every post, which automatically causes harm to any RP.

 

i actually did spell check for everything i posted, i also checked to make sure there was correct capitalization, and correct use of comma, quotes, Ect.

[Nightfall 3,950]

 

i actually did spell check for everything i posted, i also checked to make sure there was correct capitalization, and correct use of comma, quotes, Ect.

 

I'm seeing around six grammar errors in your post.

 

I actually used spell-check on every post. I also checked to make sure I used correct capitalization and punctuation.

 

That is a better way of saying what you posted.

[jdor11 91]

I'm seeing around six grammar errors in your post.

 

I actually used spell-check on every post. I also checked to make sure I used correct capitalization and punctuation.

 

That is a better way of saying what you posted.

 

http://www.topnewstoday.org/i5/6/48/93/img_2593486_620.jpg

REALLY? JUST REALLY? you would correct me even though you just kicked me out?!

[Nightfall 3,950]

 

http://www.topnewstoday.org/i5/6/48/93/img_2593486_620.jpg

REALLY? JUST REALLY? you would correct me even though you just kicked me out?!

 

This is still part of the RP.

Seeing as you are no longer part of the RP, you then don't have the right to post in this thread.

And yes, I did.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

 

http://www.topnewstoday.org/i5/6/48/93/img_2593486_620.jpg

REALLY? JUST REALLY? you would correct me even though you just kicked me out?!

 

It's better for you to know for future reference. Also, look up the difference between possessive/contractions and there/their/they're.

[Senor Citizen 516]

 

http://www.topnewsto...2593486_620.jpg
REALLY? JUST REALLY? you would correct me even though you just kicked me out?!

I'mma side with Nightfall on this one. No offense, but your grammar is EXTREMELY bad.
"Is it really that hard for you?" Striker said a little surprised, "must be because of you injury's, but i came here for two thing's the first thing... was you... and just so you know i decided to come get you by choice so thank's so much on the warm great." Striker now really pissed but keeping it cool at the moment. I highlighted all your errors in that post.

I'mma side with Nightfall on this one. No offense, but your grammar is EXTREMELY bad.
"Is it really that hard for you?" Striker saidcomma a little surprised, "must be because of you injury's, but i came here for two thing'speriod the first thing... was you... and just so you know i decided to come get you by choicecomma so thank's so much on the warm great." Striker now really pissed but keeping it cool at the moment. I highlighted all your errors in that post.

Thank God I'm a grammar Nazi. Edited March 7, 2013 by Evilshy
removed an unnecessary character limit violation. Good thing you do have enough characters without it and that I'm in a good mood :)

[jdor11 91]

if you told me to stop posting to the OOC fine

But STOP Quoting what i said before, i am no longer part of this RP so you don't have to respond to me

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

I'mma side with Nightfall on this one. No offense, but your grammar is EXTREMELY bad.

 

Look, we can handle it. We don't need you adding your two-cents.

[InfinityWhale 771]

I think that was a bit harsh. Maybe we shouldn't have just indiscriminately killed him off, after all, that's against that the rules, too. Can we rewind, and try that again, with guidance help, as opposed to just saying to fix it. I think it'd be more effective. I'll talk to him, if you like. There are better ways to handle this problem.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

I don't think it'll work. His grammar was horrible and his OC was way too overpowered.

I think that was a bit harsh. Maybe we shouldn't have just indiscriminately killed him off, after all, that's against that the rules, too. Can we rewind, and try that again, with guidance help, as opposed to just saying to fix it. I think it'd be more effective. I'll talk to him, if you like. There are better ways to handle this problem.

 

[InfinityWhale 771]

I don't think it'll work. His grammar was horrible and his OC was way too overpowered.

 

Okay, I remember my first couple of times RPing, way back in the day. I was absolutely horrible, but a couple of vets helped me out, and quickly enough, I improved. I think he just needs some help.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

Okay, I remember my first couple of times RPing, way back in the day. I was absolutely horrible, but a couple of vets helped me out, and quickly enough, I improved. I think he just needs some help.

 

I never got any tips. I think it would be better to learn from experience.

[InfinityWhale 771]

I never got any tips. I think it would be better to learn from experience.

 

How is he supposed to learn from experience, if he gets kicked out of every RP he's in for being so bad? Your logic doesn't really add up. Heck, let me take control of his tutelage. From here on out, I'll take responsibility for what he does, and watch him closely, give him advice, and you can get angry at me instead of him if he messes up.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

Ok but he and I have to edit those two posts

How is he supposed to learn from experience, if he gets kicked out of every RP he's in for being so bad? Your logic doesn't really add up. Heck, let me take control of his tutelage. From here on out, I'll take responsibility for what he does, and watch him closely, give him advice, and you can get angry at me instead of him if he messes up.

 

And he's not going to be allowed near the Ponygon

Edited July 24, 2012 by Vinyl Blade

[InfinityWhale 771]

And he's not going to be allowed near the Ponygon

 

That's okay: his mission wasn't in the Ponygon anyway. And, too be fair, you have shown some slightly god-moddy aspects too, as have I, and Nightfall, etc. We are, none of us, perfect. We always need to improve, he's just a little behind the curve compared to us. I'm going to directly monitor his posts, and with any luck, he'll improve.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

That's okay: his mission wasn't in the Ponygon anyway. And, too be fair, you have shown some slightly god-moddy aspects too, as have I, and Nightfall, etc. We are, none of us, perfect. We always need to improve, he's just a little behind the curve compared to us. I'm going to directly monitor his posts, and with any luck, he'll improve.

 

I hope you're right and don't forget about checking his grammar.

[InfinityWhale 771]

I hope you're right and don't forget about checking his grammar.

 

He's going to submit each post to me prior to submitting it to the RP, and I will check for grammar, OP moves, and other necessities. He's also going to try and improve his typing skills, so that grammar is easier for him.

 

Okay, he's going back to the part where he was imprisoned, and we're going to detail a more realistic escape attempt, and then he can go back to the original mission. But I want Vinyl Blade to play most of the NPCs he deals with, so he can improve basic player interactions.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

Okay, he's going back to the part where he was imprisoned, and we're going to detail a more realistic escape attempt, and then he can go back to the original mission. But I want Vinyl Blade to play most of the NPCs he deals with, so he can improve basic player interactions.

 

I was going to have him released, never to come back