Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 What if we died right now, but we were able to have communication with our loved ones? What would we say? What would we do? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41279/Our-last-goodbyes This is my first completed fic ever. I would appreciate it if you read and tell me what you think! 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 I'm gonna track it and read it for later :3 I got about 20 fanfics that I haven't read xD But I'll read this first :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 I'm gonna track it and read it for later :3 I got about 20 fanfics that I haven't read xD But I'll read this first Because I'm the best right? RIIIIIIIIIGHT? Oh yeah, I wrote this fic, and my favorite pony has an "occurring" which is why the picture is her crying. have fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlunderSteed 1,252 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 Sure, I'll take a look. I hardly have any legitimacy as a critic, but I can review it as an editor: grammar, internal consistency, etc. Regards, PlunderSteed Bassist, pianist, and backing vocalist for MLP-themed metal band Draconequus. Check out our latest music video, a metal cover of "Tricks up my Sleeve" here. Bassist, pianist, and vocalist for MLP-themed alt rock band Worst Princess. Check our recent live performance of "Shine Like Rainbows" here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 Because I'm the best right? RIIIIIIIIIGHT? Oh yeah, I wrote this fic, and my favorite pony has an "occurring" which is why the picture is her crying. have fun. Well I like reading Sad Fan-fictions..... especially if they have to do with Pinkie o3o I got 7 tabs each with different fanfics.... I read way too much xD :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 Well I like reading Sad Fan-fictions..... especially if they have to do with Pinkie o3o I got 7 tabs each with different fanfics.... I read way too much xD There's also a small amount of shipping in it. You'll have to read to find out how small, and for what c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 There's also a small amount of shipping in it. You'll have to read to find out how small, and for what c: Closes all tabs Let's do this! No, seriously, Sad + Pinkie + Shipping = Must. Read. Now. :3 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 Closes all tabs Let's do this! No, seriously, Sad + Pinkie + Shipping = Must. Read. Now. :3 It's not all about shipping, silly filly. There's just a small part of it somewhere in the fic. And for people who hate shipping, don't worry. It's not big at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 It's not all about shipping, silly filly. There's just a small part of it somewhere in the fic. And for people who hate shipping, don't worry. It's not big at all. enough chit-chat!Time to read this 1 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 enough chit-chat! Time to read this Then go ahead and read it c: I'm waiting to here what you think about it. Excited is the world, really c: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jokuc 8,173 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 Well I guess I am going to read it sometime when I am bored. I am way too lazy to read it right now, reading isn't really one of my biggest interests Speaking of "my first completed fic ever" ...maybe you should complete your other started fics that never were completed? ifyouknowwhatimean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 Speaking of "my first completed fic ever" ...maybe you should complete your other started fics that never were completed? ifyouknowwhatimean I bit my tongue for laughing too much xD 1 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 I am a lazy person, if you haven't guessed. The only reason this fic was completed because I did 6 hours of non stop writing xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
null123456 759 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 10/10 Reasons: - It's Crona! - Perfect Grammar - Made Me Cry Manly Tears - Made me think twice about the whole Murderous Pinkie thing.. - Just the right amount of sadness - (Don't take this one seriously) WHY FLUTTERSHY?! WHYYYYY?! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 10/10 Reasons: - It's Crona! - Perfect Grammar - Made Me Cry Manly Tears - Made me think twice about the whole Murderous Pinkie thing.. - Just the right amount of sadness - (Don't take this one seriously) WHY FLUTTERSHY?! WHYYYYY?! Daww x3Don't forget to give it a nice favorite and thumbs up c: And as for the fluttershy- BAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 9/10 Long read is looooonnnngg :3 It was pretty good, I didn't cry, or come close to crying, although, but it gave me a dark filling xD Nice work Crona :3 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 9/10 Long read is looooonnnngg :3 It was pretty good, I didn't cry, or come close to crying, although, but it gave me a dark filling xD Nice work Crona :3 GIVE ME THAT POINT DAMNIT. THAT ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH. HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME WITH ONE POINT BEHIND. NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 GIVE ME THAT POINT DAMNIT. THAT ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH. HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME WITH ONE POINT BEHIND. NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU My dog ate the last point.... '~' :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkie D Pie 1,036 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 God dang it A fic that actually sounds amazing, and I can't read it yet. I shall read this as soon as I have time. My OC's Shadow Stalker/Aarod Brachuin/Dark Chocolate/Cocoa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 28, 2012 Author Share July 28, 2012 God dang it A fic that actually sounds amazing, and I can't read it yet. I shall read this as soon as I have time. Get back to me when you end up reading it.I'd love to hear what you think about it, all reviews are fun c: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twilight Sky 449 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 I thought it was pretty well written but my favorite part was the last bit which was like a poetic letter you know? But anyways well done Crona! ^^ Twilight Sky OC Picture of some friends and me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkie D Pie 1,036 July 28, 2012 Share July 28, 2012 Get back to me when you end up reading it. I'd love to hear what you think about it, all reviews are fun c: I finished it, and I loved it. I feel like it was amazingly well written, felt like you knew the characters personalty completely, and well I loved it. I don't normally read sad things, but that was worth my eyes beginning to water ever so slightly. My OC's Shadow Stalker/Aarod Brachuin/Dark Chocolate/Cocoa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 29, 2012 Author Share July 29, 2012 I finished it, and I loved it. I feel like it was amazingly well written, felt like you knew the characters personalty completely, and well I loved it. I don't normally read sad things, but that was worth my eyes beginning to water ever so slightly. Yay c: In my opinion, the greatest sad fics do not make you cry. The greatest sad fics are the fics that make you feel bad for the characters, and you remember their struggles. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Chaos~ 3,967 July 29, 2012 Share July 29, 2012 I just finished reading it, it was very well written, and I could feel the emotions the characters were experiencing, truly a marvellous fic you wrote, I actually didn't expect the ending to be like that though! (Fluttershy's note) Overall a very good fic, well done! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,287 July 29, 2012 Author Share July 29, 2012 I just finished reading it, it was very well written, and I could feel the emotions the characters were experiencing, truly a marvellous fic you wrote, I actually didn't expect the ending to be like that though! (Fluttershy's note) Overall a very good fic, well done! Hehe, thanks a lot for the feedback And lol, the ending made my editor freak out xD It was funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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