Our last goodbyes

[Finesthour 7,284]

What if we died right now, but we were able to have communication with our loved ones?

What would we say? What would we do?

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/41279/Our-last-goodbyes

 

This is my first completed fic ever.

 

I would appreciate it if you read and tell me what you think!

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

I'm gonna track it and read it for later :3

 

I got about 20 fanfics that I haven't read xD

 

But I'll read this first

[Finesthour 7,284]

I'm gonna track it and read it for later :3

 

I got about 20 fanfics that I haven't read xD

 

But I'll read this first

 

Because I'm the best right?

 

RIIIIIIIIIGHT?

 

Oh yeah, I wrote this fic, and my favorite pony has an "occurring" which is why the picture is her crying.

 

have fun.

[PlunderSteed 1,251]

Sure, I'll take a look. I hardly have any legitimacy as a critic, but I can review it as an editor: grammar, internal consistency, etc.

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

Because I'm the best right?

 

RIIIIIIIIIGHT?

 

Oh yeah, I wrote this fic, and my favorite pony has an "occurring" which is why the picture is her crying.

 

have fun.

 

Well I like reading Sad Fan-fictions..... especially if they have to do with Pinkie o3o

 

I got 7 tabs each with different fanfics.... I read way too much xD

[Finesthour 7,284]

Well I like reading Sad Fan-fictions..... especially if they have to do with Pinkie o3o

 

I got 7 tabs each with different fanfics.... I read way too much xD

 

There's also a small amount of shipping in it.

 

You'll have to read to find out how small, and for what c:

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

There's also a small amount of shipping in it.

 

You'll have to read to find out how small, and for what c:

 

Closes all tabs

 

Let's do this!

No, seriously, Sad + Pinkie + Shipping = Must. Read. Now.

:3

[Finesthour 7,284]

Closes all tabs

 

Let's do this!

No, seriously, Sad + Pinkie + Shipping = Must. Read. Now.

:3

 

It's not all about shipping, silly filly.

 

There's just a small part of it somewhere in the fic.

 

And for people who hate shipping, don't worry. It's not big at all.

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

It's not all about shipping, silly filly.

 

There's just a small part of it somewhere in the fic.

 

And for people who hate shipping, don't worry. It's not big at all.

 

enough chit-chat!

Time to read this

[Finesthour 7,284]

enough chit-chat!

Time to read this

 

Then go ahead and read it c:

 

I'm waiting to here what you think about it. Excited is the world, really c:

[Jokuc 8,172]

Well I guess I am going to read it sometime when I am bored. I am way too lazy to read it right now, reading isn't really one of my biggest interests

 

Speaking of "my first completed fic ever" ...maybe you should complete your other started fics that never were completed?

ifyouknowwhatimean

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

Speaking of "my first completed fic ever" ...maybe you should complete your other started fics that never were completed?

ifyouknowwhatimean

 

I bit my tongue for laughing too much xD

[Finesthour 7,284]

I am a lazy person, if you haven't guessed.

The only reason this fic was completed because I did 6 hours of non stop writing xD

[null123456 759]

10/10

 

Reasons:

- It's Crona!

- Perfect Grammar

- Made Me Cry Manly Tears

- Made me think twice about the whole Murderous Pinkie thing..

- Just the right amount of sadness

- (Don't take this one seriously) WHY FLUTTERSHY?! WHYYYYY?!

[Finesthour 7,284]

10/10

 

Reasons:

- It's Crona!

- Perfect Grammar

- Made Me Cry Manly Tears

- Made me think twice about the whole Murderous Pinkie thing..

- Just the right amount of sadness

- (Don't take this one seriously) WHY FLUTTERSHY?! WHYYYYY?!

 

Daww x3

Don't forget to give it a nice favorite and thumbs up c:

 

And as for the fluttershy-

 

BAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAA

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

9/10

 

Long read is looooonnnngg :3

 

 

 

It was pretty good, I didn't cry, or come close to crying, although, but it gave me a dark filling xD

 

Nice work Crona :3

[Finesthour 7,284]

9/10

 

Long read is looooonnnngg :3

 

 

 

It was pretty good, I didn't cry, or come close to crying, although, but it gave me a dark filling xD

 

Nice work Crona :3

 

GIVE ME THAT POINT DAMNIT.

 

THAT ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH.

 

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME WITH ONE POINT BEHIND.

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

GIVE ME THAT POINT DAMNIT.

 

THAT ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH.

 

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME WITH ONE POINT BEHIND.

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

 

My dog ate the last point.... '~'

[Pinkie D Pie 1,035]

God dang it A fic that actually sounds amazing, and I can't read it yet. I shall read this as soon as I have time.

[Finesthour 7,284]

God dang it A fic that actually sounds amazing, and I can't read it yet. I shall read this as soon as I have time.

 

Get back to me when you end up reading it.

I'd love to hear what you think about it, all reviews are fun c:

[Twilight Sky 449]

I thought it was pretty well written but my favorite part was the last bit which was like a poetic letter you know? But anyways well done Crona! ^^

[Pinkie D Pie 1,035]

Get back to me when you end up reading it.

I'd love to hear what you think about it, all reviews are fun c:

 

I finished it, and I loved it. I feel like it was amazingly well written, felt like you knew the characters personalty completely, and well I loved it. I don't normally read sad things, but that was worth my eyes beginning to water ever so slightly.

[Finesthour 7,284]

I finished it, and I loved it. I feel like it was amazingly well written, felt like you knew the characters personalty completely, and well I loved it. I don't normally read sad things, but that was worth my eyes beginning to water ever so slightly.

 

Yay c:

 

In my opinion, the greatest sad fics do not make you cry. The greatest sad fics are the fics that make you feel bad for the characters, and you remember their struggles.

[~Chaos~ 3,966]

I just finished reading it, it was very well written, and I could feel the emotions the characters were experiencing, truly a marvellous fic you wrote, I actually didn't expect the ending to be like that though! (Fluttershy's note)

 

Overall a very good fic, well done!

[Finesthour 7,284]

I just finished reading it, it was very well written, and I could feel the emotions the characters were experiencing, truly a marvellous fic you wrote, I actually didn't expect the ending to be like that though! (Fluttershy's note)

 

Overall a very good fic, well done!

 

Hehe, thanks a lot for the feedback

And lol, the ending made my editor freak out xD

It was funny