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They run through the door in time to bar it off, as they do they can hear

"You have eluded me once more diehard! It will not happen again I assure you! We will meet another time!"

 

*Dizzy still dying

"We need to get him medical attention right now" said fire force alarmed.

*as the floor lowers once more

"Your gonna make it buddy." said lightning to dizzy as he goes unconscious.

"I hope you remember most of that book diehard."


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Getting back in the catacombs. LEST! PATCHES! STITCH! Dizzy needs emergency medical attention now! As they put Dizzy on the operating table the three doctors start working on him. Hes lost a lot of blood. Plus hes got cuts all over his body. And this hole in his chest leads right to his heart. Hes lucky it didnt make full contact. SHUT THE BUCK UP AND JUST FIX HIM!!!! All at the same time. Yes sir. As they work on dizzy his life flashes before his eyes. When he was born.Welcome to the family. Im your mommy Derpy. We shall call you Dizzy. First day at school. Ha ha your moms eyes are all bucked up. Yea she probably cant even see you.Haha haha haha. When they went to the park. Mommy why are your eyes no like other ponies? So i can keep watch over both of my children and see how much they have grown. The day Celestia called for her. Derpy we need you to fight this war with us. Your the only one who knows these sky better than Rainbow Dash. The day his mother died. Dizzy i hate to tell you this but your mother died today defending Ponyvill. Crying by her tombstone Why mother? Why? Why did you leave me all alone? In a black void. Is this it? Am i dead? Is this really the end for me?.... Its only the end if you let it end. Mom? Your stronger than this and you know it. That cant be you, can it? Death is an escape Dizzy. You are a Colt of strength Dizzy not a cowered. Only a cowered excepts death. I am no cowered. Light flashes and Derpy flies out. Then you will fight. And you will help usher in a new age of light. And remember.....Mommy loves you. I love you to mother. Back in the medical ward. I can feel his pulse coming back. We got him back.

Thats a relief. Now back to work. We may have to wait a lil longer to move out, but the wastelanders will find a way to break that door soon. so we need to make this quick. And im going to give Razor a piece of my mind when i see him. And yes i do remember bits and pieces of it. but the main point of it is it has a way to bring the Princesses back to life.

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Yea his going to be fine. But he was dead. Complete flat line. but we got him back. hes still knocked out from the pain. Dizzy's daughter comes to diehard face full of tears. What happened to my daddy!? Is he ok!? Is he dead!? Why? Why didnt you stop him?! You killed my father!!!! While being hit by the child Diehard picks the child up in his teeth and takes her in the room. Do you see that child? Do you see him? Does he LOOK DEAD TO YOU!!!! Do you have any idea THE PAIN HE IS IN!!!! Let me tell you this child your father risked his life to save to save you. Do you want to know the only thing he could say in his dazed state? All he could say was mother and dont take my daughter. Thats all he cared about. Your father was about to die for YOU. So if anything your father is a hero. And dont you forget it. Leaves the child at his bed side. I have something for that bucking asshole up top. But we need to leave as soon as he wakes up. The longer we wait, the more time we lose, and the world grows colder. Edited by Razorwing58

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"alright what do you need us to do?" said lightning "If in anyway i can get this guy back for what he did to dizzy i'm in! His family doesn't need to be more broken than it already is"

 

"so what is first on the list?"


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Oh dont worry. I have something special for him and his army. Remember those charges i set around the city? Holds up a detonator. I plan to destroy this whole city with all of them in it.

And they will all be burned in the sun city. As the city burns it falls to ashes and sets the grounds for the rebirth.

We will save this world. One kingdom at a time. Looks at a map. First the Luna city had to return to the sea. So i sunk the city. The sun city must burn. And that will happen in the morning. And the cloud city is next. Stabbing the cloud city on the map.


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"well until then I will be getting some sleep."

*lightning leaves lightning and fireforce until morning to see the plan carried out

as she walks away she thinks

"i can't wait to see those morons burn..."


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In diehards dream. No this cant end this way! You two cant die! The sun starts to turn black. Whats going on? Why is the sun fading? Looks back at the princesses as they start to fade away. No! NO! You cant leave us like this!

The sisters will fall. The world will fade.

And so will start the end of days.

And so will start the end of days.

No i wont let you die!

There is one way to save the world. To bring us back in to this world.

Drown the moon. Burn the sun

And the clouds and earth must become one.

And the clouds and earth must become one.

I still dont undstand. What does any of this mean?

The fate of the world.

Is in your hooves.

Light The Darkness.

Light The Darkness.

Talking in his sleep.

Light the Darkness


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*the next morning

Lightning wakes up after about 6 hours of sleep

"well I guess it's time to save the world" she said to herself

She rolls off her bunk careful not to wake anypony still sleeping and continues out of the sleeping quarters to the Tactical Head Quarters.

Diehard was waiting with fireforce to discuss todays plan.

"your late" fire force said

"Fashionable" she replied with a smirk.


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Well Dizzy is still knocked out so we will just put him the cart and roll him out. Everything we need is all packed up and ready to go. This cave lets out at the bottom of Canterlot mountain. That is the quickest way to Fogsdale. And once we leave the cave and shut it off ill set off the bombs. And boom, the sun city will burn to ashes. Just like in the prophesy. So if you guys are ready lets get this show on the road.

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"alright i'm all ready let's burn this idiot and get on with the prophesy" said lightning harshly.

*The three ponies start organizing a caravan to leave the cave.

"Everypony single file!"

"keep this all in an orderly fashion"

 

*Everyone begins to exit the cave


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Back at the palace. Get this door open. I want to squeeze the life out of Diehard. As his hand starts to reform. AHHHHHHGGGGG!!!!! OPEN THIS DOOR!!! Starts to beat and break the door. Down at the end of the cave. Lets go. Hes trying to get down here. As they make their way to Dragon Mountain over looking Canterlor. I hope he likes the little gift i left him. Breaking the the door and making his way to the catacombs. Oh Diehard! Im back! Sees a figure in the dark. There you are! Get over here! I am going to strangle the life out of you. As he squeezes what he thinks is Diehard the head pops off. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Now to kill off the rest of ....you? As he looks at whats inside the fake diehard. Awwww buck. Back at Dragon Mountain. This is for Dizzy. BOOOOOOM!!!!!!!! As the whole city of Canterlot explodes and the Sun palace burns.

And they will all be burned in the sun city. As the city burns it falls to ashes and sets the grounds for the rebirth.

Lets go. We have to make up for lost time.

And as they walk away from the ashes they here a voice. CRUSE YOU DIEHARD!!!!. I knew he would live. Lets move.


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"so if we are off to newly dubbed fogsdale, what are we going to do there that is of any importance?" asked lightning

"and why won't that guy just die?" also...

"we aren't destroying my hometown are we?" she asked with a saddened tone

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Giving a sad look. Sigh. Fogsdale must become apart of the earth. So yes we must destroy it to fix this. And the home you once knew. The Cloudsdale you knew is no longer there. All breeds of pony can walk on it now. The rainbow factory can only make blackness and smog. And the clouds are covered in blood and rains acid. Cloudsdale is no more. And we need to go here to get my book from my dick ass brother.

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well before we destroy it there is one thing i need to do there... But i know what must be done, we have to do it to save all of equestria from this damn freezing eternal night so we can once more walk without dropping dead.


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I will give you your time. Besides i have to find my brother Razor. Plus the Lunar left overs are kinda harsh. They are kind to women and children, but you colts might have a hard time. They think if you are not a Lunar veteran you must be a Solar one, or just to scared to fight in the first place. So keep your wits and dont back down.They will respect you more for that. As the fog started to get thicker, and the smell of blood and smog filled the air they could tell they were getting closer. We're here. They see a sign in all red

WELCOME TO FOGSDALE.......TURN BACK WHILE YOU STILL CAN.


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This used to be the birth place of Fire Force, now its completely ruined... he looked around the city seeing whats still standing and whats not, everything was almost all gone."So do you know where your brother is Diehard? Or we're just gonna look around till' we find him?" he questioned.

 

All Fire Force could think about was that once he found Diehard's brother, we might actually end this all, and it will be a start of a new life.


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I know where he is. But its not him thats the problem, the other ponies are. And Lighting you might want to keep your cool around some of these guys. They down talk the Solar army all the time. As they walk on the hard clouds they find a bar. THE SUNSET TAVERN. Here we go. Kicks open the front door. WHERE THE BUCK IS RAZORWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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*Lightning left diehard and fire force while they looks for his brother

She had something she's been meaning to do for a long time

She crosses the town, finding its just like she remembered years ago... just darker...

*she enters a metal gated area.

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The bar goes quite. Well well well. Look who decided to come and pay his little brother a visit. At the bar a Pegasus with a crimson and black coat and spiked mane and tail. So tell me brother did you miss me?


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*above the gate she enters it reads "cemetery"

 

To her surprise, the gravestones were all undisturbed.

She began to look through the names of all the ponies.

and came to a stop when she found the 2 she was looking for.


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All of you clear the bar now. As the crowd looked at Diehard with faces of anger. They all look back at Razor. Go on guys its ok. Ill let you back in when we are done. All of them walk out. So brother did you blow up your palace yet? I know you did cause i heard it from hear. Where is my book?
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*rainbow can hear a loud argument in the distance... the words inaudible from there.

 

she looks back at the graves marked

Flare and Thunder

Flash

 

"may you two rest peacefully"

 

"mom, dad, I miss you guys... I'm sorry for all of this... but we are going to make it right" she said starting to tear up and sob

"i'm sorry that your... our home town is going to have to be destroyed... it's the only memory i have of you. but it's to save the world... i'm sure you understand..." she sits there for a while, time seeming to stop


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Razor you know i need that book to finish the prophesy. Dont you want to fix this. Why should we even fix this hun? If you think about it this is all our fault in the first place. Dont you go there with me Razor. Or what you going to kill me? Whats the point anyway? Looks down at the ground in anger. The point? The point?! The point is so we can fix what we bucked up. We walked into a war trying to fix something that we had no need to be it. This is our buck up and we need to fix it. And we are the only ones who can. The prophesy said so. A voice comes from the a back room. Ha! Prophesy. Ive seen your prophesy and i think its a load of bullshit.

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