writing The tales of the killers

[Zalgo 593]

WARNING CONTAINS MATURE CONTENT AND COARSE LANGUAGE. READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED.

NEED AN EDITOOOOOOOOOOOERRRRRRR (lol dont ask why I'm using caps like that)

So I'm going to be writing short stories about killers. I'm going to try and release 2 every month. These aren't just human killers... Monsters, demons... You get my point. They will be written in whichever style suits the killer best: the victim's view, third person, news article and (rarely) the killers view.

PLEASE LEAVE SOME SUGGESTIONS BELOW for killers.

 

The salesman (edited by KKR. Thanks KKR! )

 

 

 

Alex was having a very bad day. He'd lost his job, his girlfriend and his house. He had to go back to his parents’ home, in the middle of the night. "It really can't get worse, can it?" Alex thought to himself. But never would he be prepared for the horrors that lie ahead.It started when he decided to take a short cut, through Raven st. His parents always told him to stay out of that place, "Lots of bad people live there" they used to say. Alex listened to his parents as a child, only ever looking at the street in curiosity, but never taking a step in it's direction. But right now he didn't care. He had lost everything. The anger blinded him so much that he did not see the masked man with a club. He was still blinded with fury as the man lifted it up, and slammed it down on his head. Alex became unconscious.Alex woke up in a dimly lit room "hunh... Where am I?" he said as he tried to get up. But he couldn't. He was chained to the wall. "What the hell? Hey, someone!!! Get me out of here!!!" He heard people crying behind him, he turned around. There were other people... Chained to the damp wall. "What's going on?" He asked one of them. But no one answered, they were all crying and screaming to be let out. Alex looked closer at some of them... There were patches of skin missing on some, others were even missing limbs. He just then noticed the blood on the floor... The trail that lead upstairs... He realized the real danger he was in. "Can someone tell me what the hell is going on!!!" he screamed as loud as he could. "Maybe I can" a new voice said from the stair way. It was the man that hit Alex. He had a bloody knife in his hand and a needle and thread.The man had un-chained Alex and brought him upstairs. "What is your name, young man?" he asked Alex. "Alex. What am I doing here?" "Well you see, Alex, I love to sell things. Not pieces of junk, but top notch, perfected things. An example is this fur coat." he said, as he took out a fur coat from behind his back. "If I used any other kind of skin, it wouldn't be as beautiful. Animal skin is so... Tacky. It's been used for far too long. That's why I searched and searched for a different material, one that would be new, original... Perfect. And then I found it. Guess what I used?" "I... I don't know." Alex replied. The man frowned. "Alex... Think of the things you've seen downstairs..." "No." Alex said. "NO!!! You bastard!!!" "Yes. The perfect material... Human flesh." "You’re insane!" "I'm rich. And the next person on my list of materials... Is you" "No!!! You can't do this... The police will find out!!!" "Will they now? I don't think so" the man said as he pointed to a bloody police officer uniform "Goodbye Alex. You'll make a good batch of wallets" he said as he pulled out the bloody knife, eager to make some more merchandise.The next week Alex was listed as missing. As well as two police officers who had gone to investigate a street named "Raven st." Also, a man gained a fortune by selling wallets and coats with his "secret material" and moved to a big city to expand his enterprise. But this secret material would be kept to himself... Except the unlucky few to find out.

 

 

Edited January 3, 2012 by toothlessbrony

[Ezynell 2,037]

Is this supposed to be a human version of cupcakes? It's quite good!

[L-PinkVsD-Pink327 177]

Story execution is abit crude (IE: Lack of capitalization where needed in some places, alot of moments rushed), but the whole thing in general is quite excellent! The idea and plot is pretty original and intresting to a big extent. This is a good story if I must say so myself.

[Zalgo 593]

Is this supposed to be a human version of cupcakes? It's quite good!

 

Actually I've never read the full of cupcakes so no ' thank you for the feed back

 

Story execution is abit crude (IE: Lack of capitalization where needed in some places, alot of moments rushed), but the whole thing in general is quite excellent! The idea and plot is pretty original and intresting to a big extent. This is a good story if I must say so myself.

 

Yes, I realized now that I rushed it a bit too much, I'll have to fix that, and the capitilization. Thank you for the feedback