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Jaded Avaricious

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sup everypony.

 

I have come up with an inspirational song for scoot to sing and i need help to get started. i have the lyrics and all i need now is a voice and a composer. anypony interested?

 

lyrics can be found here https://www.box.com/s/5b2h3o0hdcyl27jivrzm

 

i will also post them here

 

Scoots Destiny by Jaded Charger

 

 

"I'm on a quest to find my destiny,

my idol's that of loyalty.

the fastest flyer in all the land.

If only everypony could understand.

 

I'm searching for what makes me, me.

what makes every other pony unique.

my special talant that i cannot see.

i hope is soon revealed to me.

 

Will my flank be bare for years to come,

while my friends are showing talents having fun?

Will i become a Mare persay,

or will every Colt turn and run away?

 

(Scoot - "hey Rainbow Dash,

I feel like i'm never gonna

get my cutie mark. do you

know how everypony else got theirs?".

 

RD - "BAHAHA, Sure thing squirt i'll tell ya."

 

Scoot - "you will? Great!")

 

The best young flyer requires speed

great amounts of agility

against all odds i proved them wrong

and found out what makes me strong.

 

(Scoot - "and then?"

 

RD - "The other girls

watched my awesomeness

in the form of a Sonic

Rainboom that lit up the

sky and it inspired them...

 

Let me explain")

 

 

 

 

Applejack discovered that home

is where the cutie mark is,

and fluttershy though grounded, had

fallen into her destiny.

rarity traveled far and wide

and when she reached the other side,

just like twilight and her brightest eyes

and pinky pie looking up to the sky

 

they no longer had to wonder why,

or how to reach their highest heights

they had a special talent right from

the start that was with them allways

within their hearts and thats how they earned,

their cutie marks.

 

( Scoot -"Wow... Well what about you?".

 

RD - "What about me?

I'm just awesome thats

all you need to know Squirt"

 

Scoot - "Sigh Okay i guess")

 

So while good things come to those

who wait I still look forward to the day

when I discover my cutie mark."

 

 

Sooo, what does everypony think? be honest cause i need honest criticism. B)

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I can give composition a shot as well... or maybe re purpose an older song I have to work with the lyrics. I'll see what I can come up with after class.

 

Edit: After "Let me explain" I can't find any sort of melody. Is that supposed to be spoken word?

 

https://www.box.com/s/fzhoqin216etp4j94ecm

 

This is just a quick test I did. I came up with a tune to sing the lyrics, and then put them over a song I'd originally composed for Fluttershy.

 

I don't know if there's anything else I can do with your lyrics at this point though. At least not without figuring out a melody for the second half of your song. If anyone else who expressed an interest in working on this song wants to use any part of my little test for inspiration or reference, feel free to do so.

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i can try to help with composing :)

this is like, the only thing i can do, ill sand you some suck record in few days i hope, if ill have time, and ill sand you chords (tabs will be your problem)

 

never mind, dont have time

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i can try to help with composing :)

this is like, the only thing i can do, ill sand you some suck record in few days i hope, if ill have time, and ill sand you chords (tabs will be your problem)

 

never mind, dont have time

 

That was a pretty fast turnaround. :lol:

 

2 Minutes ago: "Yeah sure I can do it!"

Present: "NOPE NOPE NOPE!"

 

Sorry, that just tickled my funny bone. :)

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I can give composition a shot as well... or maybe re purpose an older song I have to work with the lyrics. I'll see what I can come up with after class.

 

Edit: After "Let me explain" I can't find any sort of melody. Is that supposed to be spoken word?

 

https://www.box.com/...in216etp4j94ecm

 

This is just a quick test I did. I came up with a tune to sing the lyrics, and then put them over a song I'd originally composed for Fluttershy.

 

I don't know if there's anything else I can do with your lyrics at this point though. At least not without figuring out a melody for the second half of your song. If anyone else who expressed an interest in working on this song wants to use any part of my little test for inspiration or reference, feel free to do so.

 

this ain't bad (singing could left to be desired but meh).

 

But seeing as scootaloo is a kid and its the traditional mlp universe (judging by those lyrics).

The instruments would have to be orchestral winds and strings to support (you know its screaming disney's "wanting more" songs). But the melody really hits home.

 

That's not my judgement call though. I'm sure the OP will gush over this as is.

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