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Princess Celestia watched in horror as Prince Aura approached the crowd of ponies. His wings lay limp against his baby blue body. Aura's back legs were completely paralyzed. It seemed to be that Discord had done his damage to the Prince. His icy blue eyes scanned the crowd and finally settled on Celestia.

 

"Princess Celestia," He said, his bold voice never faltering, "I wanted to say I appreciate you taking in these ponies from Clopsdale after the earthquake."

 

"Prince Aura," She smiled, "I would do anything to keep many ponies alive. Discord has taken too much from everypony." Her smile faultered as she settled her eyes on his once powerful, hind legs. Everypony stared at him with a certain grief.

 

"Please, come in." Celestia said suddenly. The gaurds carried him into the castle and down a long hall.

 

"Thank you." Prince Aura said and she nodded. Carefully, the gaurds carried him through a door and onto a silky bed. The bed felt nice and cool, away from the summer heat. The prince motioned the gaurds away. Celestia shut the door calmly.

 

"They were staring at my legs." The words caught the Princess by suprise. She crawled onto the bed and sat beside him.

 

"They've never seen such damage to a pony before." Celestia said, in an almost nervous tone of voice. Prince Aura nodded and rolled onto his side, working his upper body just so he could ajust his lower half. It made the Princess very upset when watching this. She remembered him when he used to frolick like a baby deer. So happy and carefree.

 

"Are you alright Celestia?" He asked, looking into her pretty violet eyes. She looked back for a moment.

 

"Yes, Prince-"

 

"Call me Aura," He smiled, "like you used to." She couldn't help but force a smile. Trying to make another pony happy, even in the worst times.

 

"I'm fine Aura." She sighed and he layed his head on his hooves. Aura looked around. The bed was a fern green that glowed in the sunlight. Gossamer curtains hung around them, glittering slightly. He felt a sudden pain course through his middle half.

 

"Ugh!" He groaned and Celestia looked over to him quickly.

 

"There goes my hips." Prince Aura groaned again.

Edited by Prince Aura

"Romance is like the sun. It's very bright and keeps you warm, but once it dissapears, you get cold and lonely." - Prince Aura

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You don't have much down to really give some great advise, but for what it is at the moment, it sounds pretty good. Why don't you write a bit more?

 

Alright. :) I added more to the story.


"Romance is like the sun. It's very bright and keeps you warm, but once it dissapears, you get cold and lonely." - Prince Aura

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