lots of drawings (Criticism wanted )

[PonyEcho 1,610]

well today has been pretty productive for me and have some more drawings and here they are

 

lets start with some canon

a simple Pinkie pie drawing

 

and so Applejack and Applebloom (both picture were shots from the episode bridal gossip during the Zecora song)

 

now lets move on to some OC stuff staring my OC called Whirlwind (until i can think of a better name)

no idea what i was drawing i think he's suppose to be managing that stall or something.

meh this was a result of feeling like an idiot thanks to Motion Spark and Sugar Plum so my OC is coming for um both.

Whirlwind chilling out on a cloud

and i just rely like drawing this pose

now last but not least a return to form with some more superhero ponifications

Poniefide Thor

Spidermare aka Scootaloo

and Night wing Ponifide

 

so here they all are feel free to give a criticism on each of them

 

now i'm gonna take a nap

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

Firstly they all are great, but on each there are some minor things...

1: The shape of the head just looks weird to me. Also the mane is a little strange looking

2: Applejack's eyes just are off... Then Appleblooms eyes look off too. (This may be because they aren't colored though...

3: This looks pretty awesome, I must say the body looks a little thin.

4: The position of the hooves just looks strange... But other than that it looks awesome.

5: I really love the form of the cloud and stuff, but the body just looks a little weird on it.

6: I love this drawing. It's really awesome, but the right flank looks a little small.

7: Spidermare gets my thumbs up. Nice drawing

8: Her legs just look too fat, but other then that nice drawing.

All in all they look pretty awesome, just some minor things that could be improved on.

[AntiDentite 37]

I think they look pretty good, but I am by no means an expert on this. I don't know if this is just a hobbie for you or if you plan to do something with these pictures but whatever, I think they look nice.

[One 499]

I really like the 6th one, you should draw all of the main 6 like that.

 

Good job by the way, keep it up. As for criticism... You need a better camera, I'm guessing you took the photo with one of those inferior iPod/Pads.

[TheLoneyPony 34]

These are pretty cool. I do agree with One though and I think it might be time to get a better or new camera, oh well, there still cool! No way I could do anything that good, Congrats!

Edited September 21, 2012 by RainbowDashRulez

[Acoustic Cloud 2,202]

they are pretty darn good drawings, i like the spiderman i mean... chicken... i mean scootaloo one

One thing i thought though was applejack's neck was too long, but other than that i think you have a good sense of proportion.

[PonyEcho 1,610]

thanks for the criticism i think i know what to do to improve them.

as for the poor camera, that not gonna change i don't rely have the money to get a better one so my phone camera has to do, how ever i usually go over my drawings with a darker pencil to make it pop out more but i'm out of them as well.

[Planty 1,053]

These are looking great

 

You seem to have proportion's almost down , just slightly off here and there, and in general the limb's feel like that is where they would be for each pose.

 

The last picture for me is the one that feel's the most off especially with the leg's, they just don't feel right

 

But to improve i do agree that maybe better coloring and clearer outlines would help a lot and add better depth to the pictures

 

Just keep practicing and drawing though and you'll be brilliant in no time