private Fallen Cloudsdale

[Cherry Blossom 864]

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For decades, Equestria was supplied rainwater for its crops from Cloudsdale. Though suddenly after changelings had been blown away from a recent wedding. Cloudsdale turned dark and became a giant lightning Cloud. The citizens of Cloudsdale were forced to evacuate because of this danger and Princess had now other choice, but to take it down. Cloudsdale was a major threat to everypony in Equestria, because of this, Princess Celestia gave orders for the Royal Guard to shoot it down. A few days after the cloud city turned dark, already more than 400 unicorns were firing beams of magic at the Pegasus haven. After few hours of shooting, Cloudsdale finally started to erupt in smoke and began to start falling. After what seemed like 5 hours, Cloudsdale came down as shattered glass pieces. Things were starting to change dramatically. Lack of rainwater caused famines, nice weather was replaced by a howl of cold winds...

 

Apple Strudel was trotting through the outskirts of Ponyville to meet up with the others of the Apple family there. He looked up into the sky and saw a dark colored Cloudsdale descending. "What the hay?" He said to himself as his jaw dropped at the scene.

 

Meanwhile Cherry Blossom was in her small cottage in Ponyville. She rubbed her eyes as she yawned and she hovered off of her bed. After hovering in a straight line, a wall hit her forehead, but thankfully it was a light impact. Her vision was impaired, the day she was born without pupils. Cloudsdale was her homeland or rather, homecloud, but she had not been aware of what was happening.

[Sky Blaze 28]

Sky Blaze weaved in and out of Cloudsdale. She stays for one night-just one night!- and the whole thing falls apart! "What am I bad luck?!" She yelled to noone as she flew out.

 

Berry Sorbet walked outside of her humble little frozen treats shop, which she was still trying to find a name for, and stretched. Nothing like a good night's rest to- see a giant cloud falling out of the sky?! Berry's mouth gaped open as she watched the spectacle.

[Clarity 3,094]

"One more stroke..."

 

The sound of a quill moving across paper echoed through the quite office. Clarity wrote the best chapter yet; this one was carefully and timely written, and she wouldn't miss a single stroke, nor let it be unfinished. Settling her reading glasses more securely on her nose, she peered at the ink strokes that she had created.

 

"Now for the inspiration!"

 

The rainbow part of the story was extremely important, and Clarity always needed inspiration to write the important parts of a book. She knew Cloudsdale, with it's multi-colored rainbow arching over the sky, would give her just what she needed.

 

Clarity took off her reading glasses and levitated the quill and notepad with her as she stepped out of her office.

 

"What...? Where's Cloudsdale?" she gasped, her mouth wide open. The white and shiny clouds have disappeared from the sky, with a stream line replacing it. Clarity's sharp eyes followed it, and saw an explosion of glass shards in the distance.

 

What's going on? She must investigate. Clarity broke into a trot to the site of the incident.

 

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Twilight Sparkle levitated the very last of the books on her shelves; it was now as tidy as it had always been. She scribbled something on a notepad, then took her quill out and replaced it with another; then, reading The Magical Theory and Teleportation for Advanced Unicorns at the same time, she ripped out the sheet she had been writing on and wrote more on the second page.

 

It was quite some time before Twilight finally closed the book, following with a tired sigh. Her belly rumbled loudly across the silence of the Ponyville Library.

 

"Time to get lunch," the unicorn remarked. "I bet Applejack would have some good apple pies waiting for us. Spike!" She called out loud. "We're going to Sweet Apple Acres!"

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

Lithimeal felt the rumbling deep underground when he saw the chance to escape from his eternal prison he took it. He let out an loud roar to let all of pony kind that he as once again returned to this world he began to climb out from the side of some kind of mountain.

[Cross Sparkle 101]

Lieutenant woke up in his room in cantorlot and he turned his head slightly to see Jasper sound asleep next to him. he smiled and looked over his life and how lucky he has been.he hoped out of bed and carefuly closed the door behind him and walked out side. what was supposed to be a nice day turned to horror."W-What am i looking at?" What he saw only was jaw dropping. Cloudsdale was.. FALLING.He had no time to lose. he took off at an amzing speed as he flew towards the castle.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

After watching the horrible view, Apple Strudel yelled to the top of his lungs, "OH SWEET HAYSTACKS OF EQUESTRIA! CLOUDSDALE IS-" he was cut off by the loud sounds of shattering glass and lightning. His irises shrunk as he saw the Pegasus city scatter into a bunch of pieces. "Oh Ah'd better tell cousin AJ about this quick! Ah'm sure she could do somethin' with them Elements of Harmonicas or somethin'!" Apple Strudel said to himself as he starting racing towards Apple Acres.

 

On his way through Ponyville he had bumped into a few ponies, but he would quickly say "Sorry sugarcube!" or "Pardon me ya'll!" before running off again. "COUSIN APPLEJACK!" He yelled.

 

Meanwhile Cherry Blossom was finally able to get out of her home with the help of her golden retriever puppy as a guide dog. "Maybe you should be my little guide dog Snow Flake." She said to the puppy as she gave him a reluctant smile. The puppy barked back and wagged his tail in an enthusiastic way, but sadly Cherry Blossom couldn't see what adorableness he was doing.

 

A small shorthair kitten woke up inside a small basket filled with soft objects like mini pillows. She had been awaken from all the noise. "Oops, I think we just woke up precious, Snow Flake." Though it is weird how a blind pegasus was able to take care of a kitten and a puppy, but by the rest of her 4 senses, she was able to get around the house easily. But except for the front door, but she usually spends her time taking care of her puppy Snow Flake and her kitten Precious. Cherry Blossom would always put the pet food where she would easily find it, but she would lose track of the food bowls. Thankfully her pets usually stay around them, giving her and indication of where they are.

 

Precious let out a few meows before her owner picked her up and held her close. Afterwards her puppy led her outside to get some fresh air, "Let's go to the park as usual Snow Flake."

Edited September 22, 2012 by Cherry Blossom

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

As soon as he was free Lithimeal saw some kind of city fall from the sky. He was laughing on the inside , He began to take flight. It was good to stretch his wings. He had a birds eye view of everything from the sky he didn't know what to make of the land now he knew were he was but almost everything as changed.

[Cross Sparkle 101]

as he reached the castle grounds all he heard was shattering glass. he turned around to see Cloudsdale turning from an amazing city in the skie to a pile of shattered peices.He was getting angry.. he was sopposed to be off duty so his .."ego" doesnt show. but this destruction was just to much he started to blood from his mouth. the first stage that tells him he is getting to angry. if he keeps it up the next stage is an urge to.. "id rather not say" he recovered from his slight "insanity" and wiped the drop of blood from his mouth and entered the castle."princess Cloudsdale is now a pile of shattered pieces W-What is going on?" He said as he ran to her royal throne.

[Sky Blaze 28]

Sky Blaze managed to get out of Cloudsdale just in time to see it break into pieces! "Oh, sweet Celestia..." She muttered as she looked at the shards.

 

Barry Sobert almost fell over as a pony bumped into her. "Gosh! Hey, what's the rush? Wanna sorbet?" She flinched when she heard Cloudsdale break. "Oh, my."

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

Lithimeal landed in a field and went to sleep, never in all of his life as he ever been so glad to be free from his underground prison, he began to close his eyes and drifted off to sleep but he wondered why be freed now he didn't understand why. He didn't know what was going on.

[Literally Snails 2,307]

Butajiri shifted through the dusty remains of Cloudsdale. the only thing that upset him was that he had not done the deed himself. At least then he could acquire some fame and recognition. He knew that times of great tragedy were the times that stories were told of, and he desired to be a subject of one of those stories.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

"Oh uh, sorry sugarcube! I'll order a sorbet some other time!" Apple Strudel replied as he continued running to Apple Acres. He tripped on a rock and lost his balance, causing him to fall into a pool of mud. He got back up and looked at all the mud on himself, "Nope, I'm still clean!" He said to nopony in particular as he was about to run off again.

 

As Cherry Blossom was hovering towards the park while being led by her golden retriever puppy. A sudden shattering noise filled the sky. Precious, her little kitten began to tremble in fear and so did her puppy Snow Flake. "O-Oh my...", She said to nopony in particular as she scooped up her puppy and tried to find somewhere he could calm her pets down.

 

A tree hit her forehead after a few minutes of hovering, "Ow," she said in a soft tone. Cherry Blossom gently sat down and leaned on the tree, while softly petting precious and Snow Flake. "Don't worry, I'm here and I won't let anything bad happen to you two," She said to them as a quick thought flooded through her mind. Cherry Blossom knew she had to go to work at the rainbow factory tomorrow, but she wanted to just relax with her pets for today.

 

((OOC: I will be controlling Princess Celestia until somepony wants to be her.))

 

Princess Celestia heard hoofsteps come inside her room, "Oh Lieutenant Sparkles. Well there was a major incident with Clouddale turning into a giant lightning cloud, but we were able to evacuate the citizens of Cloudsdale before taking it down. Cloudsdale was a threat that I couldn't let standing by so I had to intervene," she replied as she turned to him.

Edited September 22, 2012 by Cherry Blossom

[Bari 7,023]

Asteria had heard the commotion coming from the distance. She hadn't seen the fall, but something told her the sound had come from the direction of Cloudsdale. She left her cottage carefully, trying not to wake up Lapis Lazuli, her friend and guardian. Asteria made her way towards the center of Ponyville, hoping that her suspicions were unfounded. But, when she made it to town, the sky was missing a certain floating city. Her heart began to beat rapidly. Asteria was a smart pony and realized the implications of Cloudsdale no longer in the sky. This was bad...

[Clarity 3,094]

@@Cherry Blossom,

(OOC: Me being a grammar nazi and all, it's a comma before the action "said" and if it was an action, it's a period. Also, can I RP as Spike until someone takes him? Because then the following wouldn't make sense.)

 

Twilight ran as fast as her legs would take her. Her empty stomach needed some fuel quick, or she might lose some energy for studying later on. Her mind occupied on one of Applejack's delicious smelling pies, she didn't notice the darkened sky above her, or the pony she bumped into.

 

"Oof!"

 

Twilight bounced backwards. Quickly getting up and dusting herself, she immediantly apologized. "Oh, I'm so sorry, mister. I was rushing..." The lavender unicorn took another look at the pony she bumped into. From the look of him, he seemed to be one of Applejack's relatives and was rushing in the same direction as Twilight.

[Sky Blaze 28]

Sky Blaze was astounded. "Who could do something like this...?" She wondered aloud. She landed among the wreckage and looked about. No more rainbows, no more rain, no more home for the average pegasus. "I'll ask Celestia. Yeah, that's what I'll do." She began flying to Canterlot.

 

Berry Sorbet trotted from behind Apple Strudel. "I'll come with you. I want to know what's going on."

[Cross Sparkle 101]

the Princess informed him on what was going on."I understand your majesty.. would you like me to see that there are no causulties" he was given permission and he flew away. as he reached ponyville he wasnt suprised. everypony was running in confusion.He landed near SCC and just thought for a moment."how will he get them to all stop" he cant yell for the sound of their panic will drown them out...His stomach growled."heh forgot to eat breakfast.. il stop to get a quick bit and then il figuer this mess out." he turned to SCC but it was empty. "hmm. i think i heard of a farm near by. yeah then wants i eat somthing i can think clearly." He took off in the direction of the farm.

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

Lithimeal let out a loud yon, he was still sleeping in a field but he hoped that the equestrians wouldn't find him because he didn't want to be put back into his underground prison. He stayed a sleep till he smelt something in the air something yummy.

[Cherry Blossom 864]

((OOC: I'm actually thankful, because you've corrected my grammar mistake. Anyway Spikey Wikey is all yours until somepony else wants him.))

 

Apple Strudel bumped into a familiar purple pony. He got back on his hooves and offered a hoof to the unicorn. "Oh Ah'm sorry sugarcube, but wait haven't I seen you at the Apple family reunion before? You're a friend of cousin AJ right?" Apple Strudel spoke as he turned to see another mare he had bumped into. "Ah dunno what's happening either sugarcube, but it can't good." He implied as he took off his hat.

 

The sounds of shattering glass stopped, at least for Cherry Blossom. Her pets finally relaxed and were able to get back on their paws again. "Well I guess we can still go to the park now, whatever is happening." She said to them as she held her kitten Precious close while holding a leash on her puppy Snow Flake that is guiding them to the park. "Those glass noises sounded familiar, but I forgot what they were..." Cherry Blossom thought as she continued hovering to the park.

Edited September 22, 2012 by Cherry Blossom

[Literally Snails 2,307]

[so... you've all moved to your little groups and left Butajiri out, I see. Fine, I didn't want to Rp anyway!)

 

Butajiri lied down on a park bench and waited for something to happen. Without Cloudsdale, he felt very bored. He did not know anyone in the area he was in.

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

Lithimeal took the sky's again to find the source of the smell but he had no idea what he'll find. He began to trace the smell somewhere nearby but all he cared was finding the source of it and who knows maybe he'll find some one he'll might like that's if it isn't a pony.

[Octavia's Bow 2,035]

Applejack left sugar cube corner thanking Mr. and Mrs. Cake for the flour and noticed that the sky was dark. "Now, that ain't ri- SWEET MOTHER A' ZAP APPLES!" She exclaimed, seeing streaks of magic. She started to run home, and then saw her cousin had crashed into Twilight on the street. "What's it now, Apple Strudel."

 

(Take it from a highschooler, you use commas in place of periods at the end of dialog. So, actually, "My name is Clarity." she said, would actually be "My name is Clarity," she said. If you made the structure like this; She said, "My name is Clarity." Then it would have a period because you finished your thought.)

[Cherry Blossom 864]

((OOC: Some day, I will perfect my usage of the English Language. Just not today. ))

"Oh cousin AJ! Boy am I glad you see you cuz! There's somethin' wrong with Cloudsdale!" he implied as he kept trotting around in a circle, not knowing what to do next. He then looked back at Applejack and asked, "Wow. You've really changed since the last time Ah saw you."

 

Snow Flake started barking at a stallion sitting on a park bench. "Oh, what is it Snow Flake, are you hungry already?" she asked in a soft tone, but she didn't realize there was another pony around. Though her kitten Precious fell fast asleep after all the noise had stopped. Cherry Blossom could hear Precious snoring, but also Snow Flake barking at something.

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

Lithimeal heard something it sound like barking. He though to himself."Dogs flying this i gotta see". He let out a roar in hopes that the creature would at less put of a chase it as been to long after his last hunt but he had no idea what it might be. He began to fly faster after it.

[Literally Snails 2,307]

"Oh, fun. It's a dog. I just love those ever so much," Butajiri said in a less than excited voice. He sat himself upright and made sure that his blue hair was perfectly strait, before opening his light purple eyes. Nothing about him seemed to display the least bit of concern or worry.

[Sky Blaze 28]

(I'll include you!)

Sky Blaze noticed a pony lyeing down on a bench and flew over to him. "Hey! Do you know why Cloudsdale fell?"

 

Berry Sorbet sighed. "I wonder if anypony knows, and what's going to happen to us." She looked back at her shop. Without rain, they'll be no water to freeze into ice to make frozen treats.