a luv story [The Mods' Fanfic edition #1.5]

[Shiki 5,856]

The MLPforums' Moderation Staff Fanfic

by Sugar Plum

Artwork by:

Special Edition #1.5:

A Love Story

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dis tayks place aftr da mods' fanfic story adition 1 so if u didnt reed dat u shuld

link 2 1st adition ---- http://mlpforums.com...fic#entry769994

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aftr arylett's deth nd swoop dizapeering, zoop strted 2 think moar abot lyfe. he sed "i rly dnt c da point y wuld any1 evr live lyfe its pointles" but sugar plum steped in and telled him "no its nawt its point is 2 hav fun n enjoi it or else its a waste so hav da best tyme u can while ur alive cuz u dnt get a 2nd chance. jus cuz ur frends arylett n swoop r gon dosnt meen u shuld b sad cuz im shur thay wuldnt want dat" dis got zoop a litle emotional, cuz he has been goin thru so much lately. sugar plum laid a hand ovr zoop's shuldr 2 try 2 comfurt him cuz he seemd lyke he was bout 2 cry, and zoop let go of al his emotions he hd been stored up. he cryed on sugar plum's shuldr 4 wat seemd lyke hours.

"sugar plum" zoop started "ur so kind 2 me al da tyme............... y?" zoop asked. "its bcuz... well... im not sure how..." sugar plum`s voice traled off in shyniss. "wat is it???" zoop asked. "its just dat... im nyce cuz... i luv yew, zoop. i rly do" zoop's fayse got red as a red tortle shell frum maryo cart.

"r u srs" zoop asked agen, unshore. "yes" sed sugar plum "im rly shur dat i luv u..........." sugar plum lookd down 2 da grownd out of embarsmant. zoop litely grabed sugar plum's chin n tiltd it up bak 2 him n sed, "dnt b upset, cuz i luv u 2..." his voice traled off as he went in 4 da kiss. they both blushed. they kiszd eech othr agen and agen, until newclamtity walkd in an gaspd at dem in jelusy nd angr.

da end Edited October 19, 2012 by Sugar Plum

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

10/10

 

wud cri agen ;~;

[Akemi Homura 7,681]

10/10

OP is a pretty cool guy

[Ron Jeremy 2,032]

Beautiful. This brilliant prose conveys the emotions and the hardships of the characters and is written in such an amazing way that I can actually feel these characters, I can almost touch them. I feel like I have just witnessed the beginning of the age of the next literary great.

 

Nice to see my brilliant artwork get more use, even if it is outdated by now.

[I used to be a stranger 7,994]

Fun and enjoyment are not satisfactory meta-logical premises for emotional reaction from our capable staff. Moreover your construct is terrible and pacing is lackluster.Everyone in this thread has become a lesser human being because of its existence and I only suffer it to belittle everyone else to make my ego inflate like a big floppy balloon animal.

 

-1/5 and the complimentary cherries-jubilee at the Critics Gala had far too little bourbon.

[Shift 4,272]

NO.

[Wubsie 1,123]

Best Sequel to anything ever.

This should be a movie I tell you.

[Dr_Waveband 745]

tl;dr

 

10/10

[NavelColt 22,882]

Sweet merciful jesus, you made a sequel?

 

 

That said, still a better love story than Twilight.