writing Lonesome Road

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

So I walk this lonesome road, a path that was meant for me.

In turn I suppose, this is what I wish to be.

Always knowing that in the end, this lonesome road shall be my home.

To be the one who walks this path, and know it all the same.

 

Some have looked upon this path, often sharing pity.

People, apparently, know not what they squander.

My life, life to see, and a life to which I know this end.

My life, this lonesome road.

 

I go about my days in a manner, most redundant.

I place one foot in front of the other, always wanting to stop.

And, at the same time I wish to continue.

My life, this path that I must follow.

 

To be, in the end obviously.

My life, this lonely road that I walk upon.

This life I live, this path I choose.

Why, oh why, does this life suit me?

 

 

-David Favret

[Twilight Circuits 603]

A most fine piece of work. As true enlightenment, is road we must all walk alone. We can all have the tools to do it, but it must be a path that one still chooses.

[khaine21x3 789]

A lonesome road was force onto me

Freedom will never be and I will be alone for all eternity

They associate freedom and equality with democracy

But pain and suffering is all that I see

So I refuse to believe in that fantasy

 

People claim that I have their sympathies

But none of them came to rescue me

So I have to make my own opportunity

to dismantle this oppressive theocracy

 

The lonesome road will never end

My journey continues to create the Utopian land

Nobody else can understand

Nor will they lend a helping hand

But I will be the one to start the trend

 

To stomp evil in the face

defeat them with great haste

letting them know the bitter taste

while doing it all with the greatest grace

It will be the race

 

For the freedom of humanity

The only way to retain my sanity

In this land devoid of science and technology

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

A lonesome road was force onto me

Freedom will never be and I will be alone for all eternity

They associate freedom and equality with democracy

But pain and suffering is all that I see

So I refuse to believe in that fantasy

 

People claim that I have their sympathies

But none of them came to rescue me

So I have to make my own opportunity

to dismantle this oppressive theocracy

 

The lonesome road will never end

My journey continues to create the Utopian land

Nobody else can understand

Nor will they lend a helping hand

But I will be the one to start the trend

 

To stomp evil in the face

defeat them with great haste

letting them know the bitter taste

while doing it all with the greatest grace

It will be the race

 

For the freedom of humanity

The only way to retain my sanity

In this land devoid of science and technology

 

Two things... this reminded me a lot of Fallout new vegas, and I swear i would love it even more if it did not rhyme... sorry... i just generally don't like the sound of rhymes in poems.

[khaine21x3 789]

Two things... this reminded me a lot of Fallout new vegas, and I swear i would love it even more if it did not rhyme... sorry... i just generally don't like the sound of rhymes in poems.

 

Your title reminded me of the fallout:new vegas dlc.I guess I was subconsciously thinking of rap which is why they rhymed but the lyrics describe my life.

 

new poem:

 

My heart feels dead inside for I am all alone in this cruel world, Forever threading the lonesome road.

I awoke to the smell of rotting corpses and screams of pain every morning, to the sight of violated women and children

the days passed slowly as everyday is a nightmarish experience which crushes my soul

the act of religious lynching I have to witness and the messages of hate I have to endure

 

I dream to live like people of faraway lands but alas, it will forever be nothing more than a dream.

The very fate conspires against my very existence, pitting me against the living incarnations of the devil.

An eternal battle I shall fight to bring justice and peace to these hate filled land, against the relentless horde I shall stand.

The sound of gunfire shall echo through the realm and everyone shall whisper my name for I will be the ruler of the land.

 

The struggle shall come to an end and a new age of sanity shall begin, guided by my very hand.

The swooning women and petals of roses shall greet me wherever I stand for I am the emperor now, no one will dare raise a brow.

a swift death for all the subhuman fiends for that is all they deserve, let justice be dispensed.

Edited October 30, 2012 by khaine21x3

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Clap clap clap...

 

Very well indeed!.... INDEED! I do so very much like this piece... you should most definitly write more!

Such a painful experience of terror and power strugggle. ... pointless deaths and suffering... hmm yes...

[khaine21x3 789]

Terror shall consume in the night of the haloween, the entry of supernatural and the joyful sight of candies.

It all seemed dandy but the fright has yet to begin for the dead shall rise to hunt the living, witness it and despair!

a lock of witch's hair on the ground, look up and witness the flying broom and it's marvelous sound.

haunted houses that are crude, filled with spirits of the neighborhood.

The best night of their lives it was, bags filled with the night's bounty and tooth sore from decay.

arose the next day with tummies upset, they seek to do it all over again with a different set of costume next fright night

 

 

 

I'm so random that I think random stuff