[Rap] Hate Proof

[Skullbuster 1,906]

http://soundcloud.com/skull-13/hate-proof

 

my very first song, me and @@thegoodhen, worked hard on this track and i hope you enjoy it

 

keep in mind this is my first song so dont be too harsh

 

i do plan on making a youtube release, just as soon as @, finishes the cover art

[Evilshy 5,093]

I'm sorry, but through the entire thing, all I could hear was "that shit cray"

 

 

While your lyrics aren't bad, your rap voices need work. You need to be harsher and more staccato.

[Champion RD92 8,658]

Um, well, let's see...that wasn't too bad I guess XD

 

I'm not much of a fan of rap music so yeah

 

Y'all aint got nothing on Shankveld though:

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SH1BVt3VaXA

[Motion Spark 7,811]

I'm sorry skullbuster...you are a lovely guy, and I appreciate you a lot

 

but this was beyond horrible, I didn't enjoy it

 

I assume the first voice was Skullbuster's, the first thing that came to my mind was, yep, you're white XD

you lost your breath in many parts of the song, and though I couldn't see you, I couldn't feel that confidence and that "menacing" feel rappers put into their musics. It was funny instead of badass :<

 

The second voice though, who he was? thegoodhen's? his voice was much better IMO, a few observations here and there, but he had this "attitude" or whatever this is, that felt pretty legit while rapping.

 

I'm sorry, but I can't bring myself to be fake and lie. If it makes you feel better, I'm sure that you can rap much better than me.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

I'm sorry skullbuster...you are a lovely guy, and I appreciate you a lot

 

but this was beyond horrible, I didn't enjoy it

 

I assume the first voice was Skullbuster's, the first thing that came to my mind was, yep, you're white XD

you lost your breath in many parts of the song, and though I couldn't see you, I couldn't feel that confidence and that "menacing" feel rappers put into their musics. It was funny instead of badass :<

 

The second voice though, who he was? thegoodhen's? his voice was much better IMO, a few observations here and there, but he had this "attitude" or whatever this is, that felt pretty legit while rapping.

 

I'm sorry, but I can't bring myself to be fake and lie. If it makes you feel better, I'm sure that you can rap much better than me.

 well at least you are honest, but hey i can only get better right?

[Motion Spark 7,811]

 well at least you are honest, but hey i can only get better right?

why I don't get notifications?!!? 

anyways, was lurking on this thread again and saw your response, and I very much agree! I'm willing to hear more from ya! of course if you enjoy rappin' 

[thegoodhen 698]

Oh, I didn't get the notification... It's a really awesome song. I especially like the second part.

@@Skullbuster, I think you may need to rap a bit slower next time. I am also glad you ponies liked my part at least a bit. I will soon do some other collabs with my man SB! Yay.

[Skullbuster 1,906]

 

 

youtube release! wooo! i was waiting for @marco23p  to finish making the cover art, but its done now, and it looks awesome to props to him

[captainawesomeduckeh 11]

You could definitely work on your rapping voice.  I could barely understand a word you were saying.  The only thing I could hear was "AWWWW YEAHHH, Skullbuster, TGH, LET'S GOOO!" XD