shipping!

[HorrorshowMania 154]

here is my sumbition with my OC Colorful Crescendo, ill cross my fingers, i may do more submitions for this ship with mimie on tumblr, dear lord this took a while to finish, all day actually, what do you guys think? comment and tell me? -first time drawing anthers -.- be gentle-

Edited December 4, 2012 by HorrorshowMania

[Beat Shock 581]

 

 

First time? That was very well drawn, indeed!

 

Although, I did cringed at the humanized-proportions you gave them. It was very odd, yet still drawn pretty well. If you want it a bit more show accurate (with just the faces), I recommend making Fluttershy's nose smaller and rounder, and with your OC, to make his nose thicker, higher, and connecting to the top of his head.

 

 

Kind of like this random OC I found on deviantart. Just try to focus on your muzzles and proportions with the faces. Feel free to ask me for help. You definitely have potential to become a great artist!

 

Other than your OC looking like a fox, and Fluttershy's snout looking kind of like a pig's, you still did an incredible job! This is just a critique, so I want you to look at it as a nice thing. Harsh critiquing was how I got to where I am now- yet I STILL look for the feedback. Just do your own thing, and pay attention to peoples responses, then you will become champion in all art, SO KEEP IT UP!

 

-Oh and by the way, if Dimitri see's this, you are 100% screwed. No one would have a good day after messing with a Big Russian pony who protects his lovely wife with his own life. Just prey you wont be killed.

[HorrorshowMania 154]

I do admit these critiques do motivate me, and plus that's not fluttershy XD that's an OC, mimie on tumblr. I need to work on the snouts and work on proportions, yeah I can do that. Ad thanks for being one of the 84 ppl who saw this to finally comment! I mean for u guys not to comment must mean that this is the worst anthro pic ever! I guess I'll just stick to regular ponies... So much for trying something new...