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jetstorm had one eye open watching everything he didnt get any sleep and his body was starting to pay for it, his mind only race as he throught of rose and his eye twiched at the pain and his bandges were sill red with his blood but he contunied to act like he was sleeping

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Rose shook her head.

" I have loved plants more than anything my entire life. After my parents left..."Rose's sentence stopped, and she looked towards the ground.

"Can I tell you something...?"


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Rose closed her eyes and said,

"My parents never loved me, so I am afraid to love anything. My plants are the only thing that I can love, and they won't ever leave me. I can't love anything, because anything I love leaves me... And now that my plants are gone..."


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jetstorm desided he'd had enough and open both his eye and got up forgetting the pain after thinking for awile its high time he stayed out of rose's life and away from anypony eles "hmm best for everpony if i leave i coures to many problems" jet spoke out loud and made his own way to leave


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(Lol, thanks for breakthing the moment Jet.)

 

Rose tore away from Cloud to see Jet walking the other way of the entrance. She closed her eyes, and her head started to glow. In front of Jet, a stalagmite appeared in front of him, blocking his way.

 

"You aren't going anywhere."


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Cloud felt a pang of sorrow for Rose, what she had said felt like an iron spike going into his heart. Before he realized it, he wrapped Rose into a hug, as if all of her sadness and worry could be wisked away with a simple embrace, "Rose" he began, "I never realized the hurt you've been through, I am so sorry youve had to go through what you have. But I just want you to know, that... if you want me to stay... I promise you I will never leave your side. I can sense the hurt in you, and I dont want to see you hurting" he continued to hug her.

 

(Got ninjad by jetstorm, can this still run as if before he posted?)

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Cloud sighed, still smiling, "I mean that you are a beautiful mare with a beautiful soul, your kindness can shine out any darkness and bring out the best in anypony. Before I met you, I was a drifter, didnt make many friends, and was overall a lonely pegasus. But when I met you... I dont know... I just felt that youve shown a better side of me, true, I may have come across as thickheaded and cocky, but honestly, Im just glad Ive had the chance to meet somepony like you. Thats why you dont deserve the hurt that youve felt, why especially you shouldnt be alone"...

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"And that was the greatest day of my life" Cloud replied, "A first impression can be made in the first minute of meeting someone, your first impression was when you opened the door to let me in. It was then that I experienced your kindness, and it didnt change, even when the others showed up, complete strangers, you couldve said no, but you didnt. That is the most kindness I've ever seen in one pony". He then sighed again, "I just wish my first impression was better, I always come across as some cocky jerk who cant shut his own mouth".

 

(Ooc: after school, I have basketball practice, I will be off for about two hours at that time)


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(Before I join, I have a few questions so I don't have to read 600+ posts:

1- Where is the current location? Rose's house?

2- What is the state of the area around the location?

3- I read demons some pages back on a glance. Are there demons outside?

Thank you in advance.)

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( :angry: I come back to see 14 new pages of posts, I think I may just drop out because I don't see any way of keeping up with you guys)

 

(It's insane I'll admit, but RP's are very demanding to begin with...)

 

 

(Before I join, I have a few questions so I don't have to read 600+ posts:

1- Where is the current location? Rose's house?

2- What is the state of the area around the location?

3- I read demons some pages back on a glance. Are there demons outside?

Thank you in advance.)

 

(1- Apparently. 2- First it was raining fire, then it was raining rocks, now its calm for the most part. 3- No. Talk to Rose about the demons.)

 

Flynn woke up hazily, unable to make out any of the events that occurred. He saw Rose buried in Cloud's hooves, both embracing in a well needed hug. He smiled and tried to get up, but felt a sharp pain, more painful than ever before, shoot through his legs. He screamed in pain as he fell back onto the ground. Then he remembered the events before he went out. He turned to find his right hind leg, now a mixture of blue and purple, throb every few seconds.

 

He was furious, but he didn't show it as he looked back at the two. "...Cloud... did you apologize to Mint...?"


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Still fleeing from the falling boulders, EB cried out, "Why is all of this happening to me???" As he was still fleeing, he noticed a small cave nearby. He sighed as he started to rush towards the cave entrance, but his joy was shortlived. Another boulder fell just in front of the entrance to the cave, sealing the entrance off. "No! This can't be happening!!!" he exclaimed, trying to budge the boulder, but to no avail it would not budge. "Why... Of all things to happen, why this???" Just then, the area nearby him began to burst into flames. Everywhere he looked, there was nothing but walls of fire sealing him in. "No... Am I... Am I gonna..." he whimpered, collapsing to the ground, as if resigning himself. "I'm gonna... Die..." Tears then began to form in his eyes, as the flames slowly began to move closer to him. "Mom... Dad..." started the young colt. "I'll be seeing you soon..." But as he closed his eyes, a voice called out to him; a voice very familiar to him.

 

"Don't give up, son. You still have your whole life ahead of you."

 

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As soon as he heard that voice, his eyes flew wide open. Looking around, he saw he was still in the shed with all the other ponies. "Mom..." he thought, "Dad... I promise... I won't give up, no matter what may happen... Thank you for rekindling the flame in my heart to push forward..."

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Mint barely heard the words "He hasn't woken up yet" as his eyes fluttered open. In front of him, Rose stood well and fine, which was a major relief, though he himself didn't have the energy to stand.


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"When he wakes up, do it." Flynn said sternly. "And it's heavy bruising. I can fix it, but it'll take some time, especially without supplies."

 

He took notice of Mint, who was just waking up. "Would you look at that? Now do it."

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Rose walked over to Mint quickly and grabbed his hoof, taking him away from the group. Once she was a ways away, she turned around and faced him.

 

"What is your problem Mint?"


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