My Powerpuff Girls fanfic

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This is my first fanfiction ever. Please read it real quick and give me constructive criticism. It's not very long, it's only 1,319 words.

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8998266/1/Coloring-Books

 

It takes place in an alternative universe where Blossom, Bubbles, and Buttercup don't have superpowers, and aren't actually superheros, but Bubbles writes comics about them being the Powerpuff Girls, and this fic is about Bubbles turning 18, and being afraid of growing up.