writing Sacred

[Finesthour 7,287]

TL: DR:

 

I feel like this.

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=KnIQVpntAXM

It seems the hour is dark,

and the suffering goes on.

Just remember, your life is sacred...

Your pain may overwhelm your entire being.

Your thoughts of death may seem like a blessing.

Taking the pain away to replace it with nothing seems ok,

but take a step back and look at what you have become.

You used to be happy, used to talk freely with anyone.

Now you are the sad example I see today.

Pain slips through my heart whenever I see you,

because I know you are not happy to see me.

Your mind is stuck on the thought that without getting what you want, your life is over.

Your tears will slide down your cheecks in pure anguish of your loss.

While I must sit here and worry, not able to do a thing.

I dream about you killing yourself while I watch,

beause that is how I feel.

I feel as if I cannot do a thing while you take your own life,

because that seems like you are close to the edge.

Usually, a friend just listens to your problems.

Instead, I took your problems and made them my own.

Do you think you are alone in crying every day?

I cry for your very soul.

I cry that you do not realize you are special to me.

I cry because you do not realize...

That you are sacred....

Edited January 29, 2012 by Rose

[Derpy.H 177]

this is really good. I liek.

[Slendermane 477]

I usually don't care for poetry, but that is a good one. Do you feel like the one lost in the dark, or the one feeling helpless, unable to help the one lost in the dark?

[Finesthour 7,287]

I usually don't care for poetry, but that is a good one. Do you feel like the one lost in the dark, or the one feeling helpless, unable to help the one lost in the dark?

 

I share his pain.

 

I can show you my other poem that explains it much better than this one does.

[Anachronous 682]

Ooh, Rose... I really felt that, you know? The line about him you... crying about him not realizing how special he is to you just hit me so hard, almost started crying myself, my Lord. I said something in the chat earlier that loosely relates to the theme of your tale.

 

"Same can be said for anyone that's ever commited suicide. It's always a shame because, more often than not, it's not necessary. I mean, I understand the state of mind that leads a person to consider and go through with the decision, don't get me wrong, life is hard... but they aren't as alone as they think. If only they could've reached out or someone reached out to them, these suicides could've been circumvented. You know? Friendship is magic, yadda yadda, shish boom ba? It's cheesy, sure, but maybe that's all these people need. Just someone to rely on when the whole world looks like it's caving in, I guess. Issue is, when you're in that kind of emotional ravine, it becomes almost impossible to realize what's right in front of you... whether it's a hope for the future or a true friend willing to extend a saving hand through the tempest of thorns that is your depression..."

 

Rose, my, if I could help somehow I could. I've been through a similar experience twice in my life and it didn't get any easier the second time around; it's not something that can be practiced or that one can get adjusted to, I'm sorry. I think I speak for everyone when I say that you have my support in sticking through this for your friend and, if it isn't too much trouble, I'd like you to send him my regards and well wishes for getting out of what seems to be an insurmountable slump.

 

There's not much I can do for you except sympathize entirely. You're not alone and neither is he.

 

*kind of passionate so my post was likely more incoherent than i'd have liked*

[Finesthour 7,287]

Ooh, Rose... I really felt that, you know? The line about him you... crying about him not realizing how special he is to you just hit me so hard, almost started crying myself, my Lord. I said something in the chat earlier that loosely relates to the theme of your tale.

 

"Same can be said for anyone that's ever commited suicide. It's always a shame because, more often than not, it's not necessary. I mean, I understand the state of mind that leads a person to consider and go through with the decision, don't get me wrong, life is hard... but they aren't as alone as they think. If only they could've reached out or someone reached out to them, these suicides could've been circumvented. You know? Friendship is magic, yadda yadda, shish boom ba? It's cheesy, sure, but maybe that's all these people need. Just someone to rely on when the whole world looks like it's caving in, I guess. Issue is, when you're in that kind of emotional ravine, it becomes almost impossible to realize what's right in front of you... whether it's a hope for the future or a true friend willing to extend a saving hand through the tempest of thorns that is your depression..."

 

Rose, my, if I could help somehow I could. I've been through a similar experience twice in my life and it didn't get any easier the second time around; it's not something that can be practiced or that one can get adjusted to, I'm sorry. I think I speak for everyone when I say that you have my support in sticking through this for your friend and, if it isn't too much trouble, I'd like you to send him my regards and well wishes for getting out of what seems to be an insurmountable slump.

 

There's not much I can do for you except sympathize entirely. You're not alone and neither is he.

 

*kind of passionate so my post was likely more incoherent than i'd have liked*

 

I told him... and thank you for your words.

 

It's the only thing I can go on right now, for this is allI can think about.

 

I told him what you said as well.

[Anachronous 682]

I told him... and thank you for your words.

 

It's the only thing I can go on right now, for this is allI can think about.

 

I told him what you said as well.

 

While I appreciate the sentiment, there's no need at all for thanks. It's my pleasure to offer a "helping hoof" to someone who could certainly use it right now. Here's to hoping everything comes up roses and rainbows! No underlying pun intended, of course.

[Slendermane 477]

I've never had a friend who contemplated suicide, but I come from a family with a lot of Depression and Bipolar disorder (I'm not sure which one I have.) I had an uncle who committed suicide, and my mom attempted suicide once. I know what it can do to people. I've never gotten that bad, but I know I could someday.

[super*specialSTAR 19]

These are the exact feelings I feel everyday now. I can't help but understand the poem all too well. I wish I didn't though.