sparity fanfic

[OldAccount13 10]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6810/how-to-woo-your-lady-in-nine-easy-steps

 

 

Critiques? Comments?

*gasp*....maybe even compliments??

 

All is welcome here!

Edited April 19 by SparityShipper

[Zeno 47]

You certainly have done a pretty good job. I think the only problem is that maybe the drums overpower the song a bit. Turn them down a smidge. It's a nice little calm song, keep at them!

[OldAccount13 10]

You certainly have done a pretty good job. I think the only problem is that maybe the drums overpower the song a bit. Turn them down a smidge. It's a nice little calm song, keep at them!

thanks! i'll be sure to keep that in mind when i go back into the edits.

i appreciate the kind words and critique. 

hopefully I'll be able to make more like it