Windy Scamper 403 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 Might aswell start out with basic description; Main characters; Mane 6 (Specifically Rainbow Dash), Celestia, some new characters, but not my OC, probably Scootaloo, but I'm not sure DESCRIPTION It is 10 years after Twilight became a princess. Shortly after, Equestria entered a time of peace and, relectuntantly, the friends went their seperate ways. Rainbow Dash, after completing a controlled Double Rainboom, finally got all she ever wanted; she became a Wonderbolt, and got to live in Cloudsdale as a celebrity and a hero. Meanwhile, Twilight and Cadence are about to take the place of Celestia and Luna. But, Celestia has one last job for Twilight; gather the old elements of harmony and have them find 6 new ponies to take on the responsilities of being the Elements of Harmony. Rainbow Dash (reluctantly) agrees to join, but when the Elements are stolen, it's up to the Old and New Elements to find them and stop the most poweful villian yet. But Rainbow Dash's loyalties are to Cloudsdale, who are in more trouble than ever and need their Wonderbolt even more...with he rloyalties split between her old life and all she ever wanted, the fate of Equestria may lie in the hooves of our fast-flying rainbow daredevil. Okay, so here's what I need help on; 1. Generally plot review an drevision. Too generic? Toocomplicated? 2. Names and personalities of new elements. Feel free to submit your OC, you eill be credited. (Please tell me what element they are!) 3. Well, since I'm bad at creating characters, I need a villian. Probably darker (like Crysalis). Also, if anyone would like to be my editor thoroughout this project, feel free to apply in comments or PM me. Thanks, fellow bronies! EDIT One last thing; I need cover art. Should probably be Rainbow Dash's face split in two, one side with a Wonderbolt uniform and the other with her element necklace on. If you have a better idea or are up to a challenge, give me a rough sketch, and then , if chosen, PM me the final! 1 <p>MY OCS (So I never have to post a link again)Windy Scamper-Leafdew-Slide Grease-Silent Dance-MacHayver Thank you ThaumicSlime for my avatar! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bladereaper07 42 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 Sounds like a decent topic to write on to me, it seems fairly interesting but it needs to be pulled off right as to not make it sound (possibly) cliche. Looking forward to a sample chapter X) "Kiss my Flank" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windy Scamper 403 April 1, 2013 Author Share April 1, 2013 Sounds like a decent topic to write on to me, it seems fairly interesting but it needs to be pulled off right as to not make it sound (possibly) cliche. Looking forward to a sample chapter X) Yeah, give me about a week for an excrept, I'm on vacation and don't have a laptop, so if I try to write, I'll get a ton of typos But I will be sure to post the link to the story and a samp as soon as possible! 1 <p>MY OCS (So I never have to post a link again)Windy Scamper-Leafdew-Slide Grease-Silent Dance-MacHayver Thank you ThaumicSlime for my avatar! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coffee Cream 74 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 I have some ideas for new elements if you would like: 1. The element of Understanding 2. The element of Compassion 3. The element of Silliness (similar to Laughter) 4. The element of Empathy 5. The element of Acceptance 6. The element of Support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windy Scamper 403 April 1, 2013 Author Share April 1, 2013 I have some ideas for new elements if you would like: 1. The element of Understanding 2. The element of Compassion 3. The element of Silliness (similar to Laughter) 4. The element of Empathy 5. The element of Acceptance 6. The element of Support Wow, those are really good! However, I was planning for it to be the same elements, only a passing of the torch, in a way. Do, for example, Applejack finds a new pony to represent honesty, and Twilight finds a new element of magoc, and so on. However, if that idea is shot down, I would gladdly use these, or maybe for another fanfic. Those are REALLY good, so I will keep them in mind for a later time! 1 <p>MY OCS (So I never have to post a link again)Windy Scamper-Leafdew-Slide Grease-Silent Dance-MacHayver Thank you ThaumicSlime for my avatar! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfall 3,950 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 Wow, those are really good! However, I was planning for it to be the same elements, only a passing of the torch, in a way. Do, for example, Applejack finds a new pony to represent honesty, and Twilight finds a new element of magoc, and so on. However, if that idea is shot down, I would gladdly use these, or maybe for another fanfic. Those are REALLY good, so I will keep them in mind for a later time! I like this idea. And I'm thinking about sending my OC Nightfall in as the Element of Magic. It works, since he is an alicorn. If not, then, I'm fine with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceBeerG 55 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 I dont really get idea about Rainbow Dash, sorry. Just let me get it stright - there is last task of princess Celestia to Twilight to find new 6 ponies, who represent elements of harmony. Than they find that this elements is gone and ... probably going to find them somehow? And what about Dash'es loyalty? Well, if i understand idea in a right way, than you probably need someone, who either know and want to rid of elements for some reason (or just hide and use them for smth) or someone who... i think about a Discord, but since he is reformed, what did you say about primal draconequus? kinda master of Discord hmm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Light Diamond 2,802 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 If you're looking for bad guys...I have a bad character. You would be allowed to mess around with his backstory of course...he could be looking to take over Equestria and gain his full power because it was taken away or something... http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/the-thing-r2841 And you could use my oc Flame Dancer for the element of Loyalty. He isn't like Rainbow Dash...he is actually more like Fluttershy. He's calm, quite, nice and will never give up on anyone. You could use him or my OC Diamond...loyalty is basically her cutiemark. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/flame-dancer-r903 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/light-diamond-r1472 Something something something something Ask me stuff...and all my OC's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windy Scamper 403 April 1, 2013 Author Share April 1, 2013 If you're looking for bad guys...I have a bad character. You would be allowed to mess around with his backstory of course...he could be looking to take over Equestria and gain his full power because it was taken away or something... http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/the-thing-r2841 And you could use my oc Flame Dancer for the element of Loyalty. He isn't like Rainbow Dash...he is actually more like Fluttershy. He's calm, quite, nice and will never give up on anyone. You could use him or my OC Diamond...loyalty is basically her cutiemark. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/flame-dancer-r903 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/light-diamond-r1472 Okay, Th eThing is cool, so he'll probably end up as the villian. And Light Diamond would work really well for the new element of loyalty, but I'll probably make her just a pegasus (if that's okay with you). I really don't want to have an alicorn be one of the new elements. 1 <p>MY OCS (So I never have to post a link again)Windy Scamper-Leafdew-Slide Grease-Silent Dance-MacHayver Thank you ThaumicSlime for my avatar! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheImaginaryAlicorn 147 April 1, 2013 Share April 1, 2013 (edited) I think I have a veeery good idea for a villain, but I will need to type it up in my free time, so I'd have it done by...Saturday?...I'm not sure. I'm also an okay artist and I could help editing. (I know I already posted that I would help in the PM, but I just felt like postin' here...) EDIT: Okay, maybe I won't get my villain done...at least not soon. Edited April 6, 2013 by TheSonicAlicorn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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