GreenBlade 44 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 (edited) Ok so um... I made my first drawing of my OC... (I made it a while ago) I think it looks terrible, but I just thought "Why not upload it".. Dunno why, but I'd appreciate some critics. (And yes, I took it with a phone, so the quality is kinda crappy.. Also, I was too lazy to remove all of the fingermarks ) Edited April 22, 2013 by GreenBlade 5 This is my signature, I made it by myself. No, I didn't. x3 Thanks again SwiftMotion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Skywalker 642 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Looks actually pretty decent for a first time. I appreciate that the back leg is relatively accurate, and that the wing has a lot of detail (even though it looks like he only has one of them ) but the only extremely bad thing is that the hair is a bit disproportionate. I mean, I know its supposed to be big, but thats still pretty massive. Good Job overall, and you should totally draw more! Signature by Azura みぞれ 恋人 (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Starlight~ 764 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 I really like this, it is very accurate to your OC. It has room for improvement for example, the head is a little bit to big but otherwise it is really good! Hush hush, Starlights asleep, hush hush, through her telescope she weeps, hush, hush, as she hunts for mars, hush, hush, and head for stars! Starlight Request shop My page _________________________________________________________________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limey 524 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Hey, it isn't that bad! Everything seems proportional (aside from the head, but maybe that's a stylistic thing), the wing looks really good too. A few things I might suggest in the future is going for a more interesting pose and maybe some more detail to the mouth. Also, his CM is a bit unclear, and it looks like both his back legs are on the same side, but that's nothing a simple line can't fix. "I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenBlade 44 April 21, 2013 Author Share April 21, 2013 Thanks for the feedback! I just knew the mane was WAAAY too big (and also his head, actually ) And yes, I forgot the other wing >.< I'm working on a second one now, I really hope it'll turn out better Thanks alot guys! This is my signature, I made it by myself. No, I didn't. x3 Thanks again SwiftMotion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlicornMessyCaitlin 2 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Very Well Done This Look's Fine Love It! Also Excited About The Next One Keep Up The Good Work GreenBlade (The Second One Will Turn Out Great) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenBlade 44 April 21, 2013 Author Share April 21, 2013 Very Well Done This Look's Fine Love It! Also Excited About The Next One Keep Up The Good Work GreenBlade (The Second One Will Turn Out Great) Thanks, I really appreciate such amazing feed back And yeah, I sure hope it will. But I've been busy lately :/ (100 char limit: hpoia) there :3 This is my signature, I made it by myself. No, I didn't. x3 Thanks again SwiftMotion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pinkazoid 3,493 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Nononono- guys, you have it all wrong. The head is not too big, the legs are just too small, because the head fits perfectly with the body x3 You might wanna work on the ears, they look a little small, and try to come up with a pose that's not from the pony creator x3. Otherwise, it looks pretty good for a first try :3 :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygen 6,066 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Its actually pretty accurate I must say. especially for a first draw, the only real big problem is that the head is a bit big, and the mane is a bit to big aswell, but other then that you did pretty darn good! Keep it up . Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig! My Oc's, Ponysona, Bella Vocal Covers Blog, MLP Covers Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunny Blue 39 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Knew it would be great! You're such a good artist again, that's the most awesome mane ever. And yep, I'm still up at this late late hour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Silver Essence~ 2,625 April 21, 2013 Share April 21, 2013 Not bad, not bad. For your first attempt at your OC drawing, it's pretty nice! If criticism is accepted, you could work on the head and mane, I mean if it's ok to give critiques. Overall, nice first attempt dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenBlade 44 April 22, 2013 Author Share April 22, 2013 Yeah, the mane and his head is the biggest problem, I know... :/ I've been working on it lately, and hopefully it'll turn out better :3 Thanks for the feedback ^^ This is my signature, I made it by myself. No, I didn't. x3 Thanks again SwiftMotion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skullgal56 160 April 30, 2013 Share April 30, 2013 I like it It looks good :D:D The body looks good but the heads a bit to big It looks pretty accurate to your OC though :D :D DEERP! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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