Anypony got a Fiction that will make me cry?

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Hello everypony, 

 

Usually you don't see topics like these asking for a fiction or whatever it is to make somepony cry like a baby, or at least good enough to have all the emotion build up come out.... Well... That's the situation i'm in. 

 

Iv'e been having alot of emotional build up which isn't healthy for a person.. Kids, Teenagers, or even Adults. So i'm asking you ponies, to give me the best you got... I'm sensitive, but not to the maximum sensitivity. 

 

Give me a fan fiction either for me to read, or for me to listen to that will make me cry cause I really need too, and have been feeling like this for a couple weeks.. it's killing me inside and out.

 

Anyway ya, so, help me please! 

 

Thanks.  

 

Note: Please, do not post stories like My Little Dashie, I have already read MLD.. so that's exempt from the suggestions.

[)NightmareLulamoon( 51]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70667/daemeons-little-colgate

 

     A really really good Pony-on-Earth that I believe is way better than My Little Dashie (can't say so for certain though)  It's really worth a read though, however, it is unfinished but I personally know the guy who's writing it and he's doing his best to release new chapters as fast as he can (there's like 13 chapters atm)

if you don't mind grimdarks, Cheerilee's Garden and Scarlet Harvest (mostly the end of Scarlet Harvest though) are pretty good and can induce tears; http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1766/cheerilees-garden

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5381/rainbow-factory

^I had tears at the end of this one too, but even more so in it's even better written sequel Pegasus Device.

[WingMcCallister 368]

I probably don't have something that would do this. (I haven't even finished my first fanfic yet) But i do understand the feeling. My imagination has been going crazy as of late and it just needs to be relieved. 

 

Hope you get your emotional mojo rebalanced. 

[Dr. Eggnog 203]

One of my favorite fanfics is a very sad one called Moonrise that's definetly worth a read.  Also, I read one that's featured on fimfiction right now called To the Wind that's rather moving.  I've never cried for a fanfic myself though.

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

Somewhere only we know (If it doesn't make you cry, it's just gonna trouble you at least)

 

The Last Party (i cry easily :3)

 

I got many more, i just can't seem to remember any of them ;~;

[SongBrony 419]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/65143/rainbows-parents-the-truth

 

^^Here's one that I wrote. It's pretty sad from what I've been told, and I've nearly cried while writing it. So if you want to give it a go, feel free. It has FlutterDash in it jsyk

Edited April 24, 2013 by SongBrony

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Somewhere only we know (If it doesn't make you cry, it's just gonna trouble you at least)

 

The Last Party (i cry easily :3)

 

I got many more, i just can't seem to remember any of them ;~;

God.dammit.. I almost cried reading the last party. i knew she was going to commit suicide when the nurse gave her those anti depressent pills

[Magic Man 222]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/66500/maternal-instinct

 

There you go. Prepare to cry ocular gushes when you read this incredibly depressing Chrysalis and OC daughter fic. If you're not crying by Chapter Five, I don't know what's wrong with ya.

[firewritermlp 2]

i plan to write a fan fiction  soon i think it will be my oc childhood she was abused up until she ran away she had a really bad childhood it will be called the sorrow

[Mareinthemoon 348]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/58040/never-more

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45502/on-with-the-show

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/30249/lullaby

 

here are a few fics ive written that have a sad theme, never more is a Gilda fic. on with the show is a trixie fic....and lullaby is a pinkie fic

[Twilight Circuits 603]

Yeah, it's called my life story. IT might be a little hard to do, but if you read every single thing i've ever said here in order from beginning to this point in time, it would tell you a sad story, but there was still a lot of love. This has been my sole hangout since September when i lost my job. My entire world has been online since then. Imagine what you can do in that amount of time online. But as a wise teacher, I would ask you; when is it time to step up the game a little? And that my little pony, would be religion. But there's a season to sew and a season to reap, but you don't do both in the same season, and the sewing I've been working on all this time is almost complete. So it's nearly time to get ready for the happy ending. Don't know what that is? ATM, you'll have to pm me, cause I'm not quite ready yet. *insert "Soon..." pic here*

[Fiddles 20]

I don't really trust many fictions anymore. I have read too many that have destroyed my ponies and I will never trust most of them ever again..

[Captain Gobblez 55]

I'm not a person to cry with a fanfic or even a good story... but the one fanfic that DID make me cry was My little Dashy. I cried so hard afterwards that I just had to read it again. It's so beautifully written and really pulls you into the story. If you haven't read it yet it's a real must for people that like this kind of stories. 

[Twilight Circuits 603]

I'm not a person to cry with a fanfic or even a good story... but the one fanfic that DID make me cry was My little Dashy. I cried so hard afterwards that I just had to read it again. It's so beautifully written and really pulls you into the story. If you haven't read it yet it's a real must for people that like this kind of stories. 

You know I still can't believe Brony State bashed that story. I was listening to their after Episode show and they bashed it. The part I couldn't figure out was why no pony said anything... I'm 37 years old and I don't have a daughter but always wished I did amungst other dreams.

[errant 14]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/10883/a-rose-reverie

 

This one got me pretty good. It's pretty long and takes a while to build up, but the ending is very poignant and tragic. Not to mention vague enough to make it sting at your mind for a while afterward.

[DJRainbowDash 724]

Recently I got into reading Twilight x Dash stories, and there are a whole bunch of sad ones in there.

 

I recommend http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1006/decay , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54642/progress , and http://www.fimfiction.net/story/43033/dream-of-me

 

Be prepared to bawl your eyes out, I didn't myself, but I was surely close to doing so. 

[akita-ken 581]

This thread appears to be related to the My Little Pony franchise and/or the Bronydom in general. Thus, it has been sentenced to Sugarcube Corner.

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Edited April 28, 2013 by akita-ken

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

Not My Destiny!  Extremely sad, and actually pretty appropriate for right now XD.  You should go read it, like, right now.  It made me cry, and that's not easy. 

[An Old Head 4,816]

I'm not a person to cry with a fanfic or even a good story... but the one fanfic that DID make me cry was My little Dashy. I cried so hard afterwards that I just had to read it again. It's so beautifully written and really pulls you into the story. If you haven't read it yet it's a real must for people that like this kind of stories. 

 

The OP said not to suggest that story. :3

(But just briefly on the subject - why is My Little Dashie so acclaimed? It's not even sad. It goes on for like fifteen minutes, that's no time at all to bond with any of the characters.)

 

@OP, I would definitely recommend the two fan fictions Hospice and Bittersweet. They're the two saddest I've read; the writers actually know what writing devices should be used to turn their story into a tearjerker.

[An Old Head 4,816]

My little dashie made me cry! I listened to it on youtube but I cant remember who read it out. :/ It's the saddest fanfic I've ever read!

 

Again, refer to the OP's original post. He specifically asked that you don't recommend My Little Dashie. (It isn't even that sad of a story!)

 

Before I forget, OP, another sad fan fiction that I'd recommend is Past Sins. Although I didn't find it as sad as Bittersweet, it's reduced only so many others to waves of tears - and it's incredibly well written.

[Shanks 10,816]

I read this fanfic recently, it is a story about Octavia and Vinyl Scratch that is way way sadder than My Little Dashie. Here is the link

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/69603/the-letter

Edited April 28, 2013 by EarthbendingProdigy

[WingMcCallister 368]

Recently I got into reading Twilight x Dash stories, and there are a whole bunch of sad ones in there.

 

I recommend http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1006/decay , http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54642/progress , and http://www.fimfiction.net/story/43033/dream-of-me

 

Be prepared to bawl your eyes out, I didn't myself, but I was surely close to doing so. 

These were pretty good, but they didn't do it for me either. One of them didn't get much of an emotional rise out of me at all. Sadpanda

[~SadisticFluttershy~ 779]

Again, refer to the OP's original post. He specifically asked that you don't recommend My Little Dashie. (It isn't even that sad of a story!)

 

Before I forget, OP, another sad fan fiction that I'd recommend is Past Sins. Although I didn't find it as sad as Bittersweet, it's reduced only so many others to waves of tears - and it's incredibly well written.

Incorrect flipturn.

 

The reason why i say.. Don't list MLD in this topic, is because i have already read it. I did cry to this story every single time i listen to it. But it's effect on me is not there anymore so it's not on my list.

[Bigmethod 239]

Hello everypony, 

 

Usually you don't see topics like these asking for a fiction or whatever it is to make somepony cry like a baby, or at least good enough to have all the emotion build up come out.... Well... That's the situation i'm in. 

 

Iv'e been having alot of emotional build up which isn't healthy for a person.. Kids, Teenagers, or even Adults. So i'm asking you ponies, to give me the best you got... I'm sensitive, but not to the maximum sensitivity. 

 

Give me a fan fiction either for me to read, or for me to listen to that will make me cry cause I really need too, and have been feeling like this for a couple weeks.. it's killing me inside and out.

 

Anyway ya, so, help me please! 

 

Thanks.  

 

Note: Please, do not post stories like My Little Dashie, I have already read MLD.. so that's exempt from the suggestions.

I'm not one for fanfics but the one I did read made me leak some tests, it was my little Dashie. I'm a 25 y.o man I dunno what got over me :0

 

Apart from that, everything else was ok for me, but I haven't read a lot

[DJRainbowDash 724]

A question to @, do you have any particular story preferences? Perhaps there are certain characters you seem to resonate more with than others, which definitely could have an impact in how sad a story might be to you.