Rainbow Factory Escape ((WARNING: GRIMDARK))

[Jhurii 0]

In the Rainbow Factory, were not a single soul gets through. That's what they say, but that's not entirely true. There was one- no, more like eight, ponies that made it out of the factory alive.

Their escape was, however, an untold story.

Untold, at least, until now.


I guess it all started in the Rainbow Factory's 'failure' holding cells. There was Chisel: a brown maned, yellow coated stallion with blue eyes. He used to work with his mom carving statues, some of which are even displayed in Canterlot. Then there's Creator: a blue maned, black coated, maroon eyed, mute, ex-physicist colt who also developed a taste for flesh after chewing his own arm off for food. Next was Harpie: a golden maned, silver coated, emerald green eyed mare with a caramel coloured spot on her left eye and sapphire blue streaks through her mane and tale. She had the most beautiful voice, but could pop your head like balloon if she wanted to. Then there was Pip, Mark, and Orin: brown maned, red coated triplets. They always loved to try and piss off the cell guards. They somehow managed to find a way out of the cell and this one time they took a piss in the spectra. Anton, or Anon as we called him, was a grass-green maned, orange coated, red eyed master of disguise. Then, there's me, Jhurii. I'm a changeling, actually. I just wanted to see the inside of the factory, so I posed as a failure.

And, even though we didn't know much about each other, we were all brothers/ sister. And we were also mental like you would not believe. Killers, psychos, arsons, you name it and one of us fit it.


Anyway, we escaped the cells when they tried to take Creator for processing. Poor guy never saw it coming. As soon as Creator got out he grabbed the guard, tackled him to the floor and took a chunk out of his throat. After that he began ripping his chest open and eating him. When he was done, the only thing that was left was the head and a pile of bones, flesh, and bloody rags. He grabbed the keys off the... body?... and unlocked our cells.

We got outa there as fast as we could. Creator kept the guy's head. Maybe as a trophy, I don't know. Pip, Mark, and Orin took the lead and showed us to the main floor, where the spectra was made.

As soon as we saw it, we started laughing in a sort of shocked manor from the thought of the three of them sneaking down and peeing in that huge vat of yellow colour.

After we pulled our selves together, we made our way to one of the security officer's offices. I gotta say it was not pretty. When he saw us come in, he made for the alarm as fast as a cat on fire. Creator tackled him before he could hit it and started chewing on his legs while Pip gagged him. Mark and Orin started searching his desk. Anton and I interrogated him while Harpie kept a look out. The officer didn't talk, (yes, we ungagged him), so we killed him. Anton skinned him and used the officer's skin as a disguise. Creator ate what was left. Again, took his head with him for some reason.

Mark and Orin found a few scalpels and a list of ponies who apparently were of high rank in the factory.

Chisel started using one of the scalpels to make some shivs and Anton, waring the officer, asked for directions out of the factory. Whoever it was he asked was a complete idiot and even gave him a map of the factory. Anton still killed him, but as reward for helping him he didn't give him Creator.

Just after Anton got back, we reviewed the map and made a plan for escaping the factory. We'll try to sneak to the exit and if any one saw us we'd let Creator take care of them. Simple, right?

We were nearly out when guess who shows up to the party? Yes, the Factory Manager! The same bitch that stuck us all in here.

Though, instead of trying killing us all,  she offered us a contract to work at the factory. Celestia knows why. I guess she seemed impressed with how far we made it in our escape. And with how heartless we were in doing so, too, I guess. We denied the contract. Well, Chisel accepted, but everyone else denied. Orin somehow managed to sneak behind her and knock her out. Knocked out Chisel, too, I guess for good measure.

After we got off the top floor where the factory was and were heading down to exit the building, we got to thinking, "what next? We just keep running?"

That's when we noticed the empty floor right underneath the Rainbow Factory's floor. The C.W.C. building manager was there. I asked him what he was doing and what had been on this floor before it became vacant. He said the floor used to be for one of the C.W.C.'s storm factories and that he was there see what machinery had to be removed because of the, well, lack of employees willing to work in a factory that made storms that killed over a hundred ponies monthly. Too much for their consciences to handle, apparently. We offer ourselves to work there, and he seem happy to accept us as employees.

He must have known about the Rainbow Factory's prison breakout because he didn't say anything about the fact that we were covered in blood.

The floor we work on now is now know as Equestria's Natural Disasters Division, or E.N.D.D.

 

((End of part 1. Will continue story with updates every so often.))

Edited April 24, 2013 by Jhurii

[anarchistpony94 7]

very violent. adds a certain level of insanoty to the "sunshine and rainbows" of equestria. cant wait to see the rest of the story

[Twilicorn 23]

Wonderful start! However, it's not perfect. You could write more about the surroundings to help get a picture in the readers mind. Most of it is great, but remember, there's always room for improvement!