Ponymon: A super Cidal Story (work in progress)

[Gourgeist 262]

My fanfiction is a crossover of ponies (duh) and pokemon:

 

 

 

Part 1: The otter one out

 

                 There was a pony named Cidal who was......different unlike the other pegasus. His wings were bones, nothing but , and not the slightest slice of skin on them. He could still fly but not by flapping. Instead Cidal gets a jump start and slightly turns his wings up or down, much like a fighter jet. 

                 "Wake up Cidal. Today is your special day," called out his mother Inkwell, a white earth pony.

                 Today was Cidal's sixteenth birthday, a day he's been anticipating his whole life. Everypony knows during their teen years they legally can have a pokemon journey. 

                 He jumped out of his bed the way a spring breaks through a mattress. Cidal knew what pokemon he wanted waaaay before he even got to the lab of studies. 

                 Cidal literally inhaled his breakfast and was off like a rocket. He raced past the mail box, through a neighbor's front yard, and jumped over a car instead of waiting for it to pass so he could cross the street. Finally he made it to the lab.

                 " Hi, I'm professor Clopstein," greeted the orange female unicorn.

                 "All right, give me Charmander!"

                 "Nope, we have none"

                "Ummmmmm.......Cyndaquil!"

                "Last one was taken earlier"

                "Bob Sagget! How about Torchic?"

                Clopstein gave him a sad look. "I tell you what, we have 3 Unova starters. They're Tepig the fire pig, Snivy the grass snake, and Oshawott the otter. 

                She took him to greet the pokemon. 

                There were the three pokemon having a snack. Snivy and Tepig plotted against Oshawott to take his food. Tepig pointed in a direction and as soon as the curious otter turned he got a face full of Snivy's vine whip. The two mean pokemon shared Oshawott's apple. 

                "What's going on here! You rascals! What greedy animals." Professor Clopstein scolded the naughty Snivy and Tepig. 

                "Sorry about that Cidal. Don't let this incident persuade your choice. They're usually well behaved. Cidal?"

               He could not believe his eyes. It was amazing. So beautiful and cute. "Osha.....," he muttered. 

              "Oshawott! Can I have it can I have it?"

              The professor handed Cidal Oshawott's pokeball. This is probably the best day of his life. Cidal rocketed back home. He knocked over a trash can, and jumoed over another car. At home he showed Mama Inkwell his new pokemon..................to be continued