First colour OC!

[squareyes 153]

My first attempt at a colour version of my OC but I feel the face is too long. 

 

Any advice would be much appreciated as at the moment, I'm only really good with portraits.

[dedacct6 2,591]

I suggest that you make the face a little shorter and wider, and the eyes should have a thicker upper eyelash (hopefully you know what that is) and curve the eye thashes a bit, oh yea and the colours look over lapped, cover the ppencil with pen and it would look a little more evened out. but its a good start